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Roast my landing page

by Dave Faliskie

🔗 https://roadsaudio.com/

I think the overall look and style look fine but I'm wondering if the copy could be better? Is it obvious to you what the purpose of the app is, if not what gaps of info do you feel should be filled in?

Thanks for any time spent on this!

Dave Faliskie's avatarDave Faliskie
on April 25, 2023
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    Hi Dave.

    Look and style seems OK to me.

    With regards to the copy:

    • I didn't understand what your app does at the first time I read it. I had to read it again carefully. Someone else may not have the same issue.
    • Headline: Personally, I think that it is hard to predict if an app is the "revolution". Even if it were true it sounds a bit too much to me. Also, your CTA is "Join The Audio Revolution" which is unclear. I'd change it to something that clearly describes the benefit to the user.
    • Text below the headline: "Discover the future" is very generic. And "dynamic audio conversations" - I don't know what that means.
    • Some demonstration of how it works would be beneficial. Like a short video. Or 1-2-3 steps with screenshots.

    Otherwise, it looks good to me. Fingers crossed!

    Yours,
    KodingKitty

    KodingKitty's avatar KodingKitty
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      Thanks for the feedback! I'll be making some updated copy soon, this is very helpful

      Dave Faliskie's avatar Dave Faliskie
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      3 years ago
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