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Roast my landing page
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Imran Khan
https://tweettailor.com/
love this: Built with love by Ghostwriters for hustlers
Roast mine: rippedrich.com
The emojis surely convey what Ripped Rich is about :). The copy is great and the UI is simple and neat. You said you are not rich yet, but nothing about being ripped. So how many abs are we talking about?
Love the feedback thank you!
I've great six pack :)
unfortunately or fortunately, I don't have very good shoulder or hip mobility which drives me to use my core more than I should. Eg I mainly use core for exercises like toes to bar, instead of doing a good kipping for an efficient move.
6 pack!! Jeez, I only ever get far enough to a clean 2 pack and premature 3rd & 4th pack before I fall to the sin of gluttony. But it gets easier & refined every time I pick it back up.
Honestly, it looks and flows nice. The only comment I have is to consider renaming your CTAs (which you should A/B test IMO) as a few were kinda "weak" to me - "Try a free week" for example.
And since people are visual learners, perhaps give it a bit of a more visual concept, show me likes, followers, show me what I came for. Once you get a few clients, quick, visual before-after case studies should dominate the content on the page.
Good luck 🤞
Thanks! I'll review my CTAs.
A nice idea for visual representation
https://mattbarkercopywriting.com/images/2023/01/08/matt-baker-animation-post1.gif
Thanks!