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Roast my landing page!

Hello everyone,

I am turning my personal side project into MVP, and I've decided to launch a waitlist page which will be base for landing page later.

www.luniyo.com

What do you think? What would you improve?
Any feedback and constructive criticism would be helpful for later improvements.

Thanks in advance.

on August 14, 2022
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    What is "content" exactly? Text? Images? Videos? Paragraphs? Audio?

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    1. improve the copy of your hero messages, want to help but I literally don't understand what you are offering. too many empty buzzwords
    2. Add social proof: you are prelaunch so no testimonials, but you add it into the waitlist message: Join the 2000 people who already signed up for...
    3. visuals: the Greek? statue does not tell me anything, better pick a picture that visualizes the problem you are solving or even better the end result a customer gets by using your service
    4. instead of use cases ( can send those later when they sign up) I would put: how we can help you: 3 clear benefits consumers can get from your service
    5. try for free: would replace by : find out how company xxx did xxx ( enter the key benefit of your service here ) and then send the use case when they sign up

    Hope it helps, BR

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      Thanks for the list! It's very helpful insights on things I will take care of!

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        you're welcome, good luck!

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    I like the simplicity of your landing page, but I would increase all headings by 30% to create a hierarchical division that can show users where to look for your content. I would also only use one key color across the page to increase the consistency. Hope this will help. Cheers! :)

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      Thanks! I am gathering all constructive comments and I will return to editing landing page!๐Ÿ‘Œ

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    I'd say scrap the colors and go for something more exciting/eye catching.

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      Surely will, it's not so attractive as should be! Thanks ๐Ÿ‘

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    I don't get the logo. I read it as lnyo while your domain is luniyo. Sorry, maybe I just don't get the secret code here.

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    Can rephrase sub tagline as:

    • A One-Stop AI-centric solution that allows you to generate High-Quality, Original Content.

    "How it works" section can use some images for a good user experience.

    Also, try highlighting what problems it solves for the users and what this tool has to offer explicitly (Unique Selling point). Because having tools like Jasper in the limelight it would be hard to compete. Having a specific niche would do you good.

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      Thanks a lot for this๐Ÿ™

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    The logo and the content on the homepage on the left is not aligned.

    Can include a video of how the app works to have a better understanding of how it works.

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      Good tip! I have planned to make one, like a small example! Thanks

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    take care of the alt text

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    There's a lot of text on landing page. Make it concise, you don't need to put everything on the page. Just key point about your product, what is the hook you think is the core of your product. Make a clean and simple UI. Choose a primary and secondary color for the site and stick to it.

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    You're using multiple colors for buttons. Stop it! :)

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      Thanks for the insight! ๐Ÿ™

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    looks good but how are you going to differentiate it from other products providing the same service?

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      There will be some new features, which are still in development stage, and I don't want to put them out before I am 100% sure it works!

      Thanks for the answer

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    Roasting my landing page! Of https://k-electricbills.pk/ Because they moving is so fast with some of the best quality content

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      That's my weakest point because I am too focused on coding and English is not my native language. I will definitely work on it, thanks for your time.
      ๐Ÿ–

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          i am curious too, can you elaborate why gpt3 would not make sense? i have seen it working by prompting it with headline .

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          Sorry, but can you explain why is not good for such cases?
          What do you suggest then?

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              i see. Thanks for sharing the perspective from the other side.

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                  Thanks again for your honest opinion and explanation, I would surely consider this in further product development.