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Roast my Landing Page πŸ‘‡πŸ‘‡

Hi all,

Can you please give me some feedback on my Landing Page and tell me what should I change in order to improve it?

www.thepopcornmedia.com

Thank you in advance πŸ’ͺ

on April 21, 2020
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    Nice looking website.

    I would love to see some examples of contents you have created to see the quality I'm gonna get. :-)

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      Hi @mizan thank you very much for your words!

      I'll be adding some examples of our work during the week, as long as some suggested adjustments. Thank you πŸ™

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    On mobile

    • if your group of text is more than 2 lines avoid centre alignment go for left alignment. Looks cleaner, easier to read
    • background div colour does not stretch width of screen
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      Hi @NathanH thank you very much for your insights. While I'm using a website builder, I'll try to make some adjustments over the next days. Thank you very much for your time πŸ™

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    Seems interesting! Do you come up with content ideas yourself or do you expect the client to provide you idea for each piece of content?

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      Hi @neeravbm πŸ‘‹

      😁 We run all the show:

      • deliver the social media strategy (coming up with positioning, personas, posting frequency, which social media platforms to be present).

      Our value comes from bringing together business acumen, copywriting, content creation/design and social media strategy.

      πŸ’‘ To come up with content we use 2 approaches:

      1. we use the content our client already has and repurpose it (i.e. break down long-format posts, whitepapers, and long-format videos, into social media posts);
      2. we make research, define keywords and topics, come up with content ideas, and discuss those ideas with the client.

      As soon as we have all this defined we come up with a roadmap and deliver a posting calendar and start to produce the content pieces.

      As soon as we start to work we provide a Trello board where our Client can see all the work being done, and a Slack channel to better communicate.

      πŸ’Ό In our Pro plan, we even define KPIs to keep track of how the content performs and deliver a final Performance Report.

      🚧 At this moment we don't:

      • manage social media;
      • perform ads campaigns in any of these social media platforms;
      • deliver long-format content like blog posts, videos (more than 2 min), ebooks, whitepapers, etc.

      I hope I could help you out! πŸ’ͺ

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        @theparzival Nice! Can you show some examples of content that you have come up with by doing your own research? BTW this will be very helpful to show even on your landing page.

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    Hey Bernardo!

    Overall I think the sites pretty successful!

    Generally I'd suggest using the opening text to clearly state what your company does. But in this situation, I think explaining the problem works.

    You may just want to hire an english speaking person to proof read your copy though. Noticing some wording that's a bit funny / off.

    e.g. "Like popcorns, it is so good you'll want the big bucket."

    Popcorn shouldn't be plural here.

    I'll echo other comments that suggested adding some of the content you've created for others.

    Best of luck!
    J

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      Hi @Magic thank you very much for your feedback! πŸ™

      I'll be reviewing the Landing Page this weekend so I'll take all those comments into consideration!

      Regarding the English proofreading, yeah you are right, my proofreader is Grammarly, which I'll have to pay for the Pro version pretty sooner! Not that I can't write, but because I make little mistakes like those you enumerate

      Overall thank you very much, I'll be posting my Landing Page v2 over the next days!

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        Hey!

        Yes, English is an odd language with lots of weird quirks! It's my first language, I still make plenty of grammatical errors. πŸ˜‚

        Happy to take another look once you make an update!

        Best,
        J

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          @Magic thank you very much! For sure I'll ask you for another review after I make every change.

          I'm Portuguese so let's not talk about the difficulty or "weird quirks" my language has kkk πŸ˜‚

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            Awesome! Please do!

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      Thank you very much for your insights @gian_

      • regarding the Essential plan features, yeah that was a mistake I didn't notice

      Let me ask you just one thing more, is the concept clear and understandable?

      Thank you very much once again for the time you've spent