Hi all,
Can you please give me some feedback on my Landing Page and tell me what should I change in order to improve it?
www.thepopcornmedia.com
Thank you in advance πͺ
Nice looking website.
I would love to see some examples of contents you have created to see the quality I'm gonna get. :-)
Hi @mizan thank you very much for your words!
I'll be adding some examples of our work during the week, as long as some suggested adjustments. Thank you π
On mobile
Hi @NathanH thank you very much for your insights. While I'm using a website builder, I'll try to make some adjustments over the next days. Thank you very much for your time π
Seems interesting! Do you come up with content ideas yourself or do you expect the client to provide you idea for each piece of content?
Hi @neeravbm π
π We run all the show:
π‘ To come up with content we use 2 approaches:
As soon as we start to work we provide a Trello board where our Client can see all the work being done, and a Slack channel to better communicate.
πΌ In our Pro plan, we even define KPIs to keep track of how the content performs and deliver a final Performance Report.
π§ At this moment we don't:
I hope I could help you out! πͺ
@theparzival Nice! Can you show some examples of content that you have come up with by doing your own research? BTW this will be very helpful to show even on your landing page.
Hey Bernardo!
Overall I think the sites pretty successful!
Generally I'd suggest using the opening text to clearly state what your company does. But in this situation, I think explaining the problem works.
You may just want to hire an english speaking person to proof read your copy though. Noticing some wording that's a bit funny / off.
e.g. "Like popcorns, it is so good you'll want the big bucket."
Popcorn shouldn't be plural here.
I'll echo other comments that suggested adding some of the content you've created for others.
Best of luck!
J
Hi @Magic thank you very much for your feedback! π
I'll be reviewing the Landing Page this weekend so I'll take all those comments into consideration!
Regarding the English proofreading, yeah you are right, my proofreader is Grammarly, which I'll have to pay for the Pro version pretty sooner! Not that I can't write, but because I make little mistakes like those you enumerate
Overall thank you very much, I'll be posting my Landing Page v2 over the next days!
Hey!
Yes, English is an odd language with lots of weird quirks! It's my first language, I still make plenty of grammatical errors. π
Happy to take another look once you make an update!
Best,
J
@Magic thank you very much! For sure I'll ask you for another review after I make every change.
I'm Portuguese so let's not talk about the difficulty or "weird quirks" my language has kkk π
Awesome! Please do!
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Thank you very much for your insights @gian_
Let me ask you just one thing more, is the concept clear and understandable?
Thank you very much once again for the time you've spent