
So I launched SwiftReply SaaS product this week π₯ and I got my first 3 Customers πππ
BUT I don't feel my landing page message really explains my product's strong message.
PLEASE help me more with your amazing feedback (positive or negative π₯) to boost my landing page message.
Interesting Idea @aliboukeroui, Congratulations!
Some observations:
* H1 in the hero section says "Write faster emails and replies with shortcuts", but the product helps the user to write not only emails with the shortcuts but also helps in quick messaging with shortcuts in multiple non-email clients such as Twitter, Fb messenger, etc., So I think that needs some alteration to make it clear. Unless someone visits the entire page that message is not sent across I believe(maybe it is just me)
* I think the image in the hero section, does not seem to do a good job, instead if you can a small gif where someone uses the product in all the different platforms(or maybe major ones) that you have mentioned on the image will be helpful I believe.
* The CTA in the hero section says "Get 3 free templates", until I visited the pricing section it wasn't clear that the CTA is talking about the free plan. I think that can be probably changed to signup for free or something else which can directly imply that it is about getting started on the free plan
Hope it helps!
Please feel free to DM me on Twitter (notifykamalraj) if you need any clarification. I can take a look at your app and future versions of the website and give you feedback as well. Hope we can add value to each other as makers!
Looks neat, congrats!
The main doubt I had when I started looking at the landing page was: ok, this is for writing emails, but with what email clients does it work? GMail? Outlook for desktop? Apple Mail on iOS?
Then there's a video, and it shows GMail, so I'm thinking maybe it's only for GMail.
Then I saw it's a browser (Chromium) extension, so I'm not sure any more if it's only GMail, or other webmails as well.
It's only after scrolling almost to the bottom that is says it's "compatible with all E-commerce and social media sites, plus almost every mail service ever made". I think you could explain that right at the top.
Everything else seems pretty clear and well explained.