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Roast my landing page

Hi guys,
I'm thinking about launching my app Obsidian Authenticator on PH.

Could you give me an honest feedback?
Is it clear what Obsidian is or does?
Something you would modify/improve?

obsidianapp.io

Thanks

on March 22, 2021
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    Looks nice! As for content, I'd add one section: you already tell us HOW to migrate from Google Authenticator but I don't see any WHYs to migrate. Don't be shy, tell us why you're better than them.

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    Hi!

    I love the style of the page, looks very well done.

    Some thoughts:

    • could you elaborate on what struggle you're trying to solve? Is it the management of the tokens that you're trying to make easier?
    • could the word "account" be better than "assets"? I always associate accounts with 2FA, but maybe there's other cases that I'm just not aware of.
    • What about a section to describe all the features of your app that solve the various problems you're describing? Maybe throw in some screenshots?
    • Just for fun, I thought maybe it would be cool if your app screenshots were animated? Maybe show the tokens changing?
    • you might want to stick with how Apple stylizes macOS.

    Great work!

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    The white phone image is too much, it's the only thing one can look at as it's too bright on the page, maybe tune the white down? or just take it out, it's not that important I think

    from the top I thought your targeting builers
    than continuing I think your targeting app auth users (if so shouldn't do dark theme)

    I'm not sure what the messaging here is, except it's iOS only

    Best OTP app I have found

    Like this testimonial title is way better than the current title

    Make it right is like a "save the whales" messaging

    Probably 99% of non developers don't know what "Apple Keychain" is, built on top is like super technical, unless your targeting developers as your main users for this LP context (like initial target crawd)

    Well assuming your targeting 2FA users that are iOS developers that are privacy focused maybe this page is half decent, I'd still rethink the top title and desc