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Hey Neeraj! love the website and idea. just for context, i am also building a devtool startup/open source project and am working on our website/marketing/messaging. hopefully i can share a bit of what ive learned along the way and that this is helpful:

1. i like how the hero section is minimal and focuses on the hero message. with that said, i find the graphic a little distracting as it leads my eyes away from the actual message and is a little confusing because i dont see how it is connected to the actual message. it kind of comes across as you werent sure what image to use so you picked something semi generic (which can be ok as long as its not distracting).
2. i like how you included a video demo of the product, but i really wish there was sound to go with it because its a little confusing to watch the video and not hear someone narrating what everything means/what im looking at/the value/etc.
3. really liked your comparison section! my only feedback is that its a lot of text to look at and it might be helpful to have it in more of a grid, add more white space or highlight the rollout section to make it more obvious that you stand out and less for my eyes to try and focus on.

Would love to know what do you guys think?