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Roast my landing page!

Hi, I created a landing page: https://www.healthlog.life/

Any feedback and advice will be appreciated!

on October 2, 2023
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    Overall good job with the website.

    Here's some things you can improve

    • Remove one of the CTA's in the hero section and add the email form in the header itself.
    • The Website doesn't have any accent color. Maybe add accent colors to improve the overall aesthetic of the website
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    Very Minimal and Simplistic... Love it

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    Good work! Some comments about the hero section:

    1. It includes two CTAs that do the same thing. I think one might be better.
    2. The hero image would be more helpful if it was a screenshot of the product.
    3. The font size differences between the title and the sub-title is too great IMHO.
    4. Try to balance the text in the subtitle, to avoid single lonely words at the end of the paragraph.
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      Thank you for your advice!!