I think this is one of the better landing pages I have reviewed here in a while.
It's very clear what your product does and your pitch makes sense.
The main thing that I would improve are your black and white CTA buttons. They look visually very dull.
Another thing is that the over the fold and the footer areas both are very minimal in regards of colors. This is probably a design choice, but I still find it a bit boring. Limiting the use of colors can be a powerful technique, but if you do that, drop in some colorful elements to highlight what you want me to read, for example, colorful icons in front of key points, or a colorful CTA button.
But overall, I think this is very clean and working landing page. Good job!
Our Push-up trainee board system ensures minimum strain on our wrist muscles, let us engage & train more muscles by providing different variations and lastly, it also elevates the body angle to increase the range of motion by allowing more space. Improves range of motion results in better muscle gains and flexibility.
Overall, I think it's very good, however, I have a few criticisms:
Rather than using arrows to bring attention to the deals, I would make the CTA buttons a different color or animate them. The arrows make the offer look scammy, since a lot of the scam websites have really garish CTA buttons (although with the nature of your product, you should be fine, i't snot like you're offereing financial services).
Small nitpick, I would remove the sparkles that appear on the "features" text. I think it reduces professionalism a bit.
With how you enlarged the "pro" option, I would assume you want more focus on it. However, you could do more to promote it. I would change the color or make the shadows underneath it give it a higher appearance. You could also make the other options smaller.
As others have mentioned, the CTA buttons could be a brighter color to attract more attention.
Overall, a pretty good website.
Speaking of roasting, I will be releasing my website soon. FYI, I'm creating an AI API that allows devs easily build AI apps. I post a lot of it on Twitter and do building in public, so you can see it here: https://twitter.com/therealetch
Good luck on your product and congrats on your launch!
I think this is one of the better landing pages I have reviewed here in a while.
It's very clear what your product does and your pitch makes sense.
The main thing that I would improve are your black and white CTA buttons. They look visually very dull.
Another thing is that the over the fold and the footer areas both are very minimal in regards of colors. This is probably a design choice, but I still find it a bit boring. Limiting the use of colors can be a powerful technique, but if you do that, drop in some colorful elements to highlight what you want me to read, for example, colorful icons in front of key points, or a colorful CTA button.
But overall, I think this is very clean and working landing page. Good job!
I wasn't exepecting that someone would say that it's good 😅
Definitely it wasn't a design choice as design is one of my weaknesses. I will work on that.
Thank you @jv16 for taking the time to leave a feedback 🙏
Hi, kudos for going live.
Everything else looks really clean.
Hi @malcodeman, thank you man!
Nice catches, I'll fix them 👌
Love it.
Couple of improvements:
FAQ Question for you maybe to answer:
All done and deployed, thanks again!
Thank you @orliesaurus,
Totally makes sense, I would for sure do all those changes.
muscletrainee.myshopify.com
Our Push-up trainee board system ensures minimum strain on our wrist muscles, let us engage & train more muscles by providing different variations and lastly, it also elevates the body angle to increase the range of motion by allowing more space. Improves range of motion results in better muscle gains and flexibility.
Overall, I think it's very good, however, I have a few criticisms:
Rather than using arrows to bring attention to the deals, I would make the CTA buttons a different color or animate them. The arrows make the offer look scammy, since a lot of the scam websites have really garish CTA buttons (although with the nature of your product, you should be fine, i't snot like you're offereing financial services).
Small nitpick, I would remove the sparkles that appear on the "features" text. I think it reduces professionalism a bit.
With how you enlarged the "pro" option, I would assume you want more focus on it. However, you could do more to promote it. I would change the color or make the shadows underneath it give it a higher appearance. You could also make the other options smaller.
As others have mentioned, the CTA buttons could be a brighter color to attract more attention.
Overall, a pretty good website.
Speaking of roasting, I will be releasing my website soon. FYI, I'm creating an AI API that allows devs easily build AI apps. I post a lot of it on Twitter and do building in public, so you can see it here: https://twitter.com/therealetch
Good luck on your product and congrats on your launch!
Everything makes sense!
I didn't knew that arrows look scammy, thanks for letting me know!
I will work on the CTA buttons for sure.
Thank you @RichardGao for taking the time to leave a feedback!
I couldn't find a tweet where you talk about your solution! it's better if you pin some tweet where you talk about it. good luck to you too.
You're welcome!
As for the tweet, I've got on about my AI API pinned, it's "Evoke". Might pin something else though lol.
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Thank you @MrTools, it really means a lot 🙏