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Roast My Landing Page

Rate my landing Page from 1 to 10 and what you guys think will my product grow or not https://localy.ai/

on September 29, 2023
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    I think the UI of your website is great but there are too many words in each section, which makes me a little tired to read. I understand that you want to make your point as clear as possible to the potential user, but you need to make sure that each of your subheadings should be within 6 words or less, and that the statements are as much as possible in one sentence. Also, I think you should highlight the features of your product on the first page of the website, I think the current statements are not attractive enough.

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      Yes You are righ i should reduce the heading length
      and second one is also a correct i should also describe my product features to users

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    7.5 haha but actually you should stick to a main header (one sentence) and then 1 subheader (1-2 sentences) for the first screen. Right now theres like 3 subheaders and it looks like a pyramid. Also don't put your pricing as a CTA button, just keep the sign up as the main CTA button under your header.

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      Oky very good advice so will put signup button instead of pricing thanks for the advice

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    There are a lot of meaningless statements, that, at least for me, reduce trust. For example "Localy Is The Perfect Solution For You!" - how can you claim such thing when you have no idea who I am? Since it is just on your website and not a landing page with a specific funnel, you can't make assumptions on your target audience.

    "...is the perfect solution for <target>" is much more believable. Because now you're just making things up, making me think that all the other statements are equally made up.

    Kind of same thing with "Groundbreaking Content Solution". Don't tell me what to think, show me what it does to make me think it is groundbreaking instead.

    Show, don't tell.

  4. 1

    What can this do that I can’t do directly with OpenAI. That is always my first question with this kind of thing.

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    +1 to those confused about what this product actually can do. I think there's a temptation to show ALL the things your product can do on the front page. I'd suggest instead picking your strongest workflow and showcasing that. You can cover the rest of the functionality further down, or on other pages, or even just in your "feature list".

    In summary, this landing page has way too many words for me, and I also can't tell what the little videos are trying to show me. I can sort of reason that this is a thing for generating content using AI in some interesting ways, but I'm not sure what makes it different from anything else or why I'd want to use it.

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      should i add the features on landing page start?

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    This is great! I think you've done a very nice job detailing and illustrating what your product does and how it works. I think one thing that isn't always obvious to people is why they would want to use a service like this rather than simply using ChatGPT directly? Not sure if this is worth highlighting in your FAQs. But it's definitely something that I've questioned before and I'm sure I'm not the only one! Otherwise, the design, interface, etc. looks great! Definitely a product that I would consider using for my content creation and look forward to following your journey and learning more!

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      Here are the reason why you should use my product rather than chatgpt
      in such a lower price $5 only you will get
      Al image generation
      Al Voice Over
      Al Content writing with 60+ templates
      Chatgpt is not offering image generation and voice-over
      Here are full features you will get in $5
      OpenAI Model: GPT 3.5 Turbo
      Words Included: 120,000
      Characters Included: 180,000
      Image Included: 250
      Minutes Included: 12
      AI Image: Yes
      Text to Speech: Yes
      Speech to Text: Yes
      Templates Access: Professional

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    For me, at first glance I'm not sure what your product can do

    "Unlock the power of simple, user-friendly AI"

    Sounds interesting, But what does it do is not really clear. I think you should change it so
    "to generate effective content & Images. Create easily & plagiarism-free content for emails, blogs, and website 10X faster."
    look more interesting, Or maybe change the headline to make it easier to understand
    I imagine something like
    "write content 10X faster with user-friendly AI" -> this is easier to grasp and it's understandable since the first line.

    Also, For CTA. I think it might be more fun instead of "Get Started for Free" but use something like "Click now to write content 10X FASTER!" it might be more catchy.

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      Yes You are Right Starting Line Should Be Better and Engaging

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    This isn't a landing page, it's the homepage of a website. A landing page should only have 1 type of CTA that appears multiple times in the right spots, and that brings users to your desired goal, it shouldn't have any internal links that could distract the user from the main goal :)

    But it seems a nice home, I would leave this as it is, and create a proper similar landing page, with some corrections, to another link/url. And then you promote that link/url

    Some notes:

    1. Under "Unlock the power of simple, user-friendly AI", I would unify the smaller text under one size, and make it shorter. Also, maybe, the title above may be enough if you write it in a way to shortly represent your product (if that's possible)

    2. "How does it work?" would be great if you could present this in a way that users don't need to click tabs to read content

    3. "Localy Is The Perfect Solution For You!" I would arrange elements (and make them shorter) to increase readability. I feel like there's a lot of text, and if a user doesn't know you/your product, maybe they will not read it all. Also the paragraph, seems quite long. Are we sure all that text in that section is necessary? :) - I feel the same for some other sections, if possible, increasing the size of these paragraphs and making texts shorter, would probably increase chances that users will read them

    4. Eyebrow headlines, e.g. "AI is better than ever before" seem too small / hard to read. May need to improve the typography a little bit. They may also be unnecessary. If the general copy is easy to understand, they can probably be removed. In general, these are rarely necessary, and are used mostly by news/blog websites, or to indicate categories of an element, etc.

    PS: there's also a different school of thought, in case you want to really be selective with your audience. You may decide to make it "less easy" to navigate and read for a general audience... if you know your target market will read it anyway

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    I don't know about a number score, but I'd say you're somewhere in the middle. There are little things, like you need a lower-case i for the word Images.
    I think the "or" between the two buttons just clutters things.
    The bigger problem, as I see it, is that in the case of AI these days, I think you have to make it very clear what makes your offering different than all the other AI things out there, especially the ones that are front-ending ChatGPT. That's the part I think you need to boil down to as few words as possible and put up top.
    Hope this helps.

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      Thanks for the advice i will surely follow it