Roast My Landing Page! :)

by hershyb_

http://about.musfuse.com/

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submitted this linkon November 2, 2020

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I like the visuals! Except maybe that the menu bar is transparent when you scroll down.
Other than that, I didn't really get what problem it would solve for me. Except that I would maybe see friends who use Apple Music in my feed? Right now I just use Spotify. At the same time though, I don't engage / consume that much music. :)

Trunksome

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  Thank you for taking a look at our landing page :) You got it right, the idea is that right now there is no easy way to share music with your friends who use different platforms. Now, you can create groups with your friends to share and listen to music on one platform. So if your friends use Apple Music, you can all use MusFuse to listen to music that you've shared with each other. Hope that helps!
  
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Here are my thoughts on Musfuse, @hershyb_ -->
- The design seems to bland, could be surely improved
- The controller icon on the left of discovery section is too big
- The phone mockups on left of cross-platform section is too close and the gap is not equal between the phones
- Copy writing seems okay but could be improved, I would suggest checking out VeryGoodCopy. They teach you all the neccessary copywriting skills.
harshvijay

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  Thank you for the feedback! That is very helpful with specific steps we can take to improve, really appreciate it. I will definitely look into VeryGoodCopy and improve the other issues. Do you have any specific insight on how to improve the design? Is the improved copywriting for the pieces of text that we have within the landing page?
  
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