Roast my landing page
I've launched the product for 2 months and the organic traffics have been terrible. One of the reasons is definitely my bad landing page.
I know... I built it from scratch instead of using a template. Because I find modifying templates very annoying.
My page https://www.writableai.com
- Do you get what I offer?
- Does the page give you motivation to try my product?
Thanks!
I liked your minimalist design(use of only a few colors), also the content explains well what you re offering. I feel the background is too white, may be use some light grey background instead of white.
Also you have mentioned that your AI's English is better than copywriters. I feel this is can be changed to something else, which is not so negative about copywriters. If you feel your AI is actually better than copywriters, then provide a couple of screenshots comparing content written by copywriters and AI on couple of topics, you can highlight the time saving with AI
Thanks for the feedback! Indeed, "AI's English is better than copywriters" this may make copywriters angry...
Your sections need a little bit of color to divide them up. Even if it's just a gray background like #fafafa.
The description under your h1 on the hero section is a little hard to read because of the line-height. Try bumping that up to 1.6.
Your sign up and sign in buttons are touching currently. Give them a lil space.
Some of your copy lines are really wide. A good rule of thumb is to keep the number of words per line to about 14. That usually works out to be about 500 to 600 pixels wide for a text box. Some of your text spans the whole width of the site. Tightening that up will help readability.
Hope that helps!
That's really helpful! thanks so much