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Roast my landing page

Hi everybody!

I know you all have lots of experience with websites, so I thought to utilize your
expertise here to refine my landing page

https://widgetbrew.com/?indiehackers

While I would love to hear your perspective on all aspects including design, I have concerns about the clarity of my message. So, I'm just asking for your feedback, primarily on the content.

on September 11, 2023
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    I really dig the way you've organized everything, but I'm finding the font a bit tricky to read. Also, I'm not quite sure where the page explains why we should be excited about code-free widgets! 😄

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      Thank you for the feedback! I will try to change the copy to be a little bit more clear.

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        Good luck with your app

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      Thank you what did you liked? Was there things you didn't like?

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    I don't like the color scheme. For me the colors demonstrate sadness.

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      Colors are really interesting to me, I'll definitely watch out for that, for me it represents calm and cozyness :)

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    Here's a loom video.

    Ironically enough, I built a custom nav like this for my agency website (383 Studio).

    I think there's some serious visual design improvements that can be made on both the website and product itself. But it's an awesome idea! I shared some of that feedback in the loom video, and feel free to shoot me an email (brandon@383studio.com) to talk about some visual update spec work I can whip up for you and your team!

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      Thank you Brandon! That's great feedback, I looked at your website and you have a really great navigation bar going on ;) I've sent you an email.

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    My immediate reaction is I'm not sure why I would want a 'widget' as a customer. It seems like a catch-all phrase for a bunch of things, but hard to communicate the value quickly of what your product is and why I would want it when it's so broad.

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    I think it's pleasant on the eyes, but I also had to take a minute to really read through it to understand what it is.

    Widgets can mean different things in different context. I would immediately define what a widget is in your context, and what it does, in 2 sentences or less.

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      Interesting feedback! I will definitely try to define what is a widget for sure.

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    It may be partly because I am not your customer, but it seems hard to grasp right away what your company exactly does, or who it is for. Would love to see more visuals as well!

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      Thank you for the feedback! I agree that more visual would be great.

      WidgetBrew let you customize widget that can then be added to your website.