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Roast my landing page

Finally got time to work on a new project I was thinking about building for a while (AI Agents): https://prospectai.xyz

Just looking for some brutally honest constructive criticism on the overall style/structure + the copy of the landing page.

Please let me know your thoughts!

on December 4, 2024
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    You’re close — biggest conversion lift is usually clarity + proof order.

    Quick test for 48 hours:

    1. Hero = one concrete outcome + who it’s for (no broad claims)
    2. Move one real before/after result above the fold
    3. Put a low-friction CTA first ("See sample output") before "Book demo"

    If you want, I can give you a 5-fix teardown here: https://roastmysite.io/meta-ads-roast.html?src=ih_reengage_b343_l028

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    Hi,

    I’m specialized in CRO (Conversion Rate Optimization), which is the art of improving conversions on the web.

    Right now, I’m offering completely free support for landing pages. Basically, I’ll audit your landing page and give you clear recommendations, both short- and long-term, to help boost your conversions, all based on research and proven methods.

    I provide this service for free under these conditions:

    1. you apply my recommendations,
    2. you give me feedback,
    3. you leave a review if you think it deserves it,
    4. your page has more than 4,000 visitors per month.

    Feel free to reach out if you’d like my help, or if you know someone who might benefit from it. Thanks for your time, and have a great day.
    You can contact me at: tom.haug67@gmail.c o m