Roast my landing page?
Hey IH!
I've just soft launched Featuristic. It's a tool to simplify product management for those who are not proficient with product management - indie hackers, small dev teams, etc.
Here is my landing page: https://featuristic.io/
Appreciate any feedback! Thanks!
Hey Val
I like the colors, nice and poppy.
I think the max width is a bit thin; you could open it up so your hero text can be more significant. I also can't really tell what going on in the product image
The same goes with the testimonial text directly under that. It's pretty tiny.
The icons in your features sections are way too big, I'd cut them down by 60 percent
Looks great! Perfect for the stage you're at
Thanks Casey!
I'd replace this page with a video demo. Value prop above it, CTA below it. That's it. I think it would perform much better.
Thanks for the feedback!
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Cool! Will take a look.
HI!! this is actually very good!!!
Thanks, appreciate the positive feedback!
the colours are good, the contrast is little bit high
Thanks for the feedback!
Hey Val, like the concept -- I was thinking something like this is useful for small teams as well. Agreed that the width is too narrow and the icons are too big. Good start, keep going!
Thanks Riley!
I love that you lead with a screenshot, but it'd be even better if it were expandable to fullscreen on-click.
Your page was able to convince me to give you my email and make an account, just because it made me curious what the app would be like and easy to sign up and see. And honestly, I don't much care for PM-tech, so I'd say the landing page is a hit.
Hi Fred! Awesome, feel free to contact me directly if you decide to actually use the product, encounter any issues, or have further feedback.
And totally agree with your comment about the screenshot, will work on that!
Is this Airtable?
Hi Steph! No, and I should work on the messaging if you came to this conclusion. Are there any specific parts on the landing page that made you think this way? Thanks!
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Will try, thanks!
Checked from iPhone. I would play with spacings and font sizes/position to make them stand out more. Some visuals would be nice as well.
Thanks for your feedback, Edgar!
I cannot really read what's on the image at the top. I'd make it bigger.
By reading through your copy, it's not clear to me why I should buy your software now. What are the problems I have solved by your software?
That's an important question to answer.
The overall look of the landing page is fine. Nothing special, but also not bad.
I agree with Joshua. I'm viewing from a large screen and cannot clearly read the content of the first image. I'm in my 40s and the prebyopia is coming, but I think it's missing some definition or framing.
It would be necessary to emphasize what differentiates this product from other similar ones.
Thanks! Yes, I agree too, image is not the best one.
Thanks for the feedback, I will think about this!
I like it, especially the way you set expectation of pricing! I don’t know if your target market is right but in terms of landing page, its good.
Thanks for the feedback! What your thoughts on the target market specifically?
You’re using language for product managers but saying its not for product managers. I think real creators solve this problem with lists in notes or notion or something similar. How is your product better? If in fact this is a product for product managers figure out a way to make it better than asana or whatever pms use.
p.s i agree with everyone saying the hero image is too big. You don’t have to show th exact product, just how it feels using it.
Good points. Appreciate your insights!
My pleasure, feel free to ask me to clarify if anything was unclear