Recently I've made some changes to our homepage. Since then, the conversion improved gradually. But it may also be the influence of the recent holidays. I don't want to double-guess, so I'm asking for feedback 👀
Would love to know:
Landing page: https://www.makerbox.club/
Seems more like a homepage than a landing page? Are you trying to drive sign-ups via paid traffic? If so I think you need more CTA's and sign up forms higher up on the page to get someone to take an action before bouncing
Got it, thanks!
I don't have paid traffic, only organic for now
I like it! It has his own unique design. It doesn't look like generic landing page and I love that comics/graphic art design.
thank you!
Hi, Sveta,
What I like is that founders are located at the top - it somehow tells that there are real people behind the product. Plus, since your product is focused on one-person business - having just two people on your team says "Yes, we know how you feel".
What am I missing is probably some CTA button in the right top corner.
Got it, thank you for the feedback!
Very well done!
One bit of feedback for you - my eye first when to the "So you can build..." line. This was a bit disorienting since I'm reading the content out of order. I'd recommend putting more emphasis on the "We create actionable..." line.
Valid point, thank you!
Thank you!
What did you use to build it?
That's Typedream
Hey! Really liked it, here are some comments:
Thank you for the feedback!
Hi, I have taken a look at your website so I can answer your 3 questions.
By the way, I made a growth framework that I am using to build my startups and get clients (though, it is better suited for products).
If you're curious, here are some examples posted below.
Here is an example of a Growth Audit:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LjRjzZbR2tHHtXcilFcFxxpS3atnYA7yM8mbvk5N9Rc/edit?usp=drivesdk
Here is an example of a Growth Strategy, too:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FGaYC0X9eIRrZDG6TEDGu2ukDn7qsnu4o_hGue6b1es/edit?usp=drivesdk
If you are interested, feel free to schedule a video call with me here: https://calendly.com/omnisaas/30min?month=2023-04
Thank you!
The irony is that you charge $199 to roast people's pages. :)