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Roast my landing page 🔥

Recently I've made some changes to our homepage. Since then, the conversion improved gradually. But it may also be the influence of the recent holidays. I don't want to double-guess, so I'm asking for feedback 👀

Would love to know:

  1. What did you like about the landing page?
  2. What you didn't like about the landing page?
  3. What unanswered questions about the product do you still have?

Landing page: https://www.makerbox.club/

on April 21, 2023
  1. 3

    Seems more like a homepage than a landing page? Are you trying to drive sign-ups via paid traffic? If so I think you need more CTA's and sign up forms higher up on the page to get someone to take an action before bouncing

    1. 1

      Got it, thanks!

      I don't have paid traffic, only organic for now

  2. 2

    I like it! It has his own unique design. It doesn't look like generic landing page and I love that comics/graphic art design.

  3. 2

    Hi, Sveta,

    What I like is that founders are located at the top - it somehow tells that there are real people behind the product. Plus, since your product is focused on one-person business - having just two people on your team says "Yes, we know how you feel".

    What am I missing is probably some CTA button in the right top corner.

    1. 1

      Got it, thank you for the feedback!

  4. 2

    Very well done!

    One bit of feedback for you - my eye first when to the "So you can build..." line. This was a bit disorienting since I'm reading the content out of order. I'd recommend putting more emphasis on the "We create actionable..." line.

    1. 1

      Valid point, thank you!

  5. 2
    1. Very nice and clean and simple design. I dont agree with the people saying its too crowded.
    2. Very minor thing but the carousel with quotes are moving a little fast, but maybe thats just med.
    3. My understanding is that I get a PDF or similar with 100 actionable marketing ideas, so if that is correct everything is clear to me.
  6. 2

    What did you use to build it?

    1. 1

      That's Typedream

  7. 2

    Hey! Really liked it, here are some comments:

    1. Love the overall design aesthetic, some very cool design concepts that make a user focus on what's important.
    2. It's a tad bit too crowded for my taste, I felt a bit overwhelmed with all of the info. I also didn't like the fact that prices are hidden between a ton of clicks.
    3. It took me a while to understand that there are different products
    1. 1

      Thank you for the feedback!

  8. 2

    Hi, I have taken a look at your website so I can answer your 3 questions.

    1. I liked that your website is colorful and the imagery poated on the website was standout and iconic.
    2. I am somewhat confused to what MakerBox is. The copy reads like it is a service while the imagery reads like it is a SaaS. So, I am assuming that it is a framework for solopreneurs to grow faster.
    3. see #2.

    By the way, I made a growth framework that I am using to build my startups and get clients (though, it is better suited for products).

    If you're curious, here are some examples posted below.

    Here is an example of a Growth Audit:
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LjRjzZbR2tHHtXcilFcFxxpS3atnYA7yM8mbvk5N9Rc/edit?usp=drivesdk

    Here is an example of a Growth Strategy, too:
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FGaYC0X9eIRrZDG6TEDGu2ukDn7qsnu4o_hGue6b1es/edit?usp=drivesdk

    If you are interested, feel free to schedule a video call with me here: https://calendly.com/omnisaas/30min?month=2023-04

  9. 1

    The irony is that you charge $199 to roast people's pages. :)