Can you guys roast my landing page?
It is hand-coded, had great fun doing this!
Here's the link: https://www.studyinholland.fyi/
Let me provide some context: I work as a Technology Consultant, but pursued side projects the last couple of years.
This is the first one I started with my sister in 2021. We initially launched a Hungarian version (since I'm Hungarian) of the e-book, which received a nice amount of downloads. While the download count wasn't staggering, it did demonstrate its relevance for the targeted keywords. As the e-book was free and the Hungarian audience planning to study in The Netherlands was relatively small at the time, we put the project on hold.
However, recently I decided to share the link on Reddit and received an encouraging response. In a single day, it garnered over 60 downloads and even received a donation of 1 USD. This inspired me to launch a version for the wider public and assess its potential for success.
My current focus is to generate more downloads and leverage that as an opportunity to either launch a paid version or seek sponsorships. I would greatly appreciate your feedback on the landing page, keeping in mind that the Twitter URL is broken (not yet on Twitter).
Thanks,
Kristof
Hi @escadesupremo quick feedback. Some stuff is verbose. Example -
We understand that finding affordable student accommodation can be a daunting task, especially when you are moving to a new city. That's why we have put together this section to help you understand how student accommodation prices fluctuate across the Netherlands throughout the year and what you can expect when moving to different cities.
Can be re-written as -
Finding affordable student accommodation in a new city can be scary. This section helps you understand how process fluctuate across the Netherlands.
Thanks, man. Agreed. Will re-write some of the messaging.