Roast my landing page and I will roast yours 🤜🤛
Hey guys,
Recently I just finished my first SaaS project, and I am looking for some feedback. It is a chrome extension, and hopefully the landing page provides enough info about it.
To make it fair please provide your product/landing page and I will try to add some constructive criticism.
Without further ado:
https://pagetuner.io
Fellow cruip template user, I see :)
Nothing wrong with that, a few things though:
The hero image seems wrong on my (widescreen monitor), its bleeding all the way to the top.
I'd make hero image larger, viewable, get rid of the rotation/effect.
Google store rating, what does that mean? (It isn't a mobile app.)
The logo is blurry
In the footer, logo to background color contrast isn't great (too close).
Cheers man thanks! Google store rating is the rating in the extension web store, but I will make it clearer. Good to know widescreen monitors have issues with the site, I will check it out.
Thanks again!
Really nice job with this - it was a pleasure to read. I have these suggestions, but take or leave them as you see fit:
The value prop was a little ambiguous when I first read it. Something like "Visual site feedback for you and your team" feels a little clearer.
"Pagetuner is a chrome extension to help you collect feedbacks and boost your team's productivity by embedding comments and changes directly on-site." I'd turn this around since the most important bit is last, i.e. "Embed team comments and changes directly on your website, and all through your Chrome browser."
the photos and names on the testimonials are great, but can you put the roles of the people and which companies they're with (if they're not just freelancers)?
The only difference in the pricing section is the number of projects. You could simplify this section by having "Every plan comes with" and listing those things out, then make it clear that users choose a plan based on the number of projects they need. Can they downscale after a month or two? That's what I'd be wondering.
Can you link to the Google Store reviews to back up that rating?
Re-prioritise the six features - mobile support (particularly that it's a separate changesheet) seems huge to me. Free Trial feels like it's in there to make up the numbers.
Minor point: Is "feedbacks" (in value prop description) a word? I only question it because the English across the rest of the site is flawless.
My site is www.payzip.co.uk if you've time to take a look.
Great work!
Hey, thanks for the valuable feedback, I will definitely implement some of them!
About payzip,
The landing page is clean, interestingly the only thing I feel is a little cheap is the hero. Line-height in the subtitle feels too large, image feels a bit out of context, just overall doesn't have that wow effect.
Once I started scrolling I really liked the layout of the page, testimonials, screenshots all made it clear what you are proposing.
Have you considered adding the /features part of your page to your landing page? I think showing the visitor as many features as you can should be a part of the homepage, since you are trying to hook them.
Overall I think the product is great and the landing page is obviously working, so really good job with that!
Thanks for taking the time, @daniel_fulop. The hero image is going to be replaced with a product screenshot and a link to a video of the product in use too, so totally hear you on that.
The features were originally part of the landing page, but I'm always concerned that it's too long, so I wanted to make it a separate page to track how many people would look at it. I'll bear what you say in mind though and might bring some features onto the home page, with a link to a full features page or something.
Can I ask what resolution you viewed the site on? That will help me enormously.