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Roast my landing page?

We're considering updating our landing page for Waitlist [https://getwaitlist.com]. Would love any feedback and roasts -- what do you think we can do better?

Happy to provide feedback in return if you share your product as well. Been looking through a dozen landing pages recently

on October 4, 2022
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    Hello,

    Your landing page is nice! But I'll change a few things:

    • Pricing page
    • CTA button
    • Call to action

    I invite you to take a quick look at my post "My step-by-step guide to creating the perfect landing page for your SaaS", i explain everything in it.

    👉 https://www.indiehackers.com/post/my-step-by-step-guide-to-creating-the-perfect-landing-page-for-your-saas-d7308631f7

    All the best.

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      Ohh, thank you for sharing! I'll certainly read through when re-desigining :D

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    Hi Maya, it looks great! Just two things:

    1. Grow blazingly fast is quite generic. I would change the value proposition to what you have in the description instead, "Quick and easy waitlist with built-in referral." I feel this clearly communicates your product value.

    2. 'Sign up for free button' can be bigger and more prominent with your brand color background.

    All the best 👍

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      100% -- this is great feedback, thank you for taking the time to share :)

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    Don't get discouraged by my feedback but here it is:

    Hero section of the homepage:

    • the right size image/text is very boring. Too much information
    • Make "sign up for free" button in theme color instead of dark. It is not standing out and affecting your conversion
    • I will use real color of customer logos. Way more impactful

    Overall homepage:

    • your graphics/visuals have too much information, not beautiful and not impactful
    • Too much text on the page. Simplify the messaging of each section
    • photos of Shane and 0xStanftf are not showing in Brave browser
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      Hi! This is super super helpful -- thank you!!

      Regarding the graphics and visuals: Do you mean that the visuals have too much text in them and that I should remove the text specifically?

      Otherwise, I totally agree that we can make it slightly lighter on the information.

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        Yes, too much text in the graphics/visuals. I would rather create simpler graphics and/or GIF to communicate visually.

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          Got it -- I totally agree!

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    Overall it looks good! There's just one thing we noticed about the "Referral marketing
    for your next big thing"
    , it's a bit dull. This is the final call to action in your landing page, and if someone scrolls down until there most probably they're really interested. Can try to make it a bit attractive, something like in https://buffer.com/ for example.

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      Great point and I totally agree with you -- thank you! We should probably add some stats as well -- the buffer website inspired me on a few items now :)

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        Happy to help :)

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    Hey Maya! First off, product seems awesome - really really valuable tool that I wish I had a year ago!

    Feedback:

    • Great social proof, and seems like an honestly great product.
    • Hero text could be better. I've seen the comment, but I don't really like "blazingly" either. Maybe just say "Grow faster with..."
    • Make sure no typos: "Avoic putting two engineers on a six-week project to build your own system."
    • Image for "Shane, Beyond.so" didn't load
    • "Sign up for free" button should be way bigger and that blue-purple color.
    • Image on the right hand side is not inviting.
    • Quote from Emma Smith should maybe be higher?
    • Bring the "Features" section higher - it matters more than dashboards
    • Is the sign up free or the product free?

    Would love if you could review my landing page (and would love if you signed up for the product too!!!): https://www.onsleek.com/