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Roast my landing page 🔥

Hey everyone, I have redesigned the landing page for Zen Mode 2.0
https://zenmode.carrd.co/

looking out for some feedback
Any help is highly appreciated. Thanks! 🙏

on May 23, 2022
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    I absolutely love the simple and elegant look of the landing page! My two suggestions would be to:

    1. maybe incorporate some graphics in the "what is it?" section.
    2. The last section (Using the app preferences, Zen Mode can be your 1-click:) could use some more love. Maybe some gifs that show how it works could help there.
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      as I am replying to this post I am working on that section...gonna try adding some icons to it.

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    Here is a link to feedback on your landing page, hopefully some of this is helpful!

    Zen Mode Feedback

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      Thanks for taking your time, I am reworking on the design of the landing page.

      FYI, I tried to sign in your website but it keeps asking me to verify my login despite I already did that

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        Thanks for catching that, we will take a look at the login verification.

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    Wow, absolutely love this landing page! It's incredibly clean and well-designed, love the minimalist design also. Great screenshots too! If you wanted to add further demos of the product in action, you could insert the screenshots into mockups, there are lots of online mockup generators out there you could make use of.

    My only suggestion would be to update the "How it works?" heading to "How does it work?" It just sounds better to me, but that's only a suggestion haha

    Overall, love this landing, great work and all the best with the launch!

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      "How it works" sounds different to me now ...haha

      Updated to "how does it work"

      Thank you for taking your time.

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        No problem! Glad to help out! :D

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    1. make the "what is it?" part's question shorter.
    2. display some pictures if possible next to each "what is it?" part's question
    3. hero section is not eye-catching you improvise it like this https://chatapplicationtemplate.webflow.io/

    I can help you for free to make eye-catching designs and content.
    let me know if you are interested.

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    The button didn’t load correctly on mobile. The text Download MacOS extended beyond the button, so you couldn’t see the whole thing.

    I think you should add a graphic of a blank desktop screen (what happens after you use your product) at the top. It’s not clear to me that this about the desktop screen and sounds just from the text at the top. This would help clarify at least what the product pertains to desktop (vs. mobile).

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      Thank you for taking your time. I've fixed the issue on the button text.