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Roast my landing page 🔥💩
by
Stephen Stanton
Go on, hit me with your best shot. I can take it…
https://cloudventory.io/
I would talk with you more about this, you can find me on LinkedIn. By the way here are a few words to roast you:\)
• Your headline is too vague and generic. You should use a more specific and compelling headline that tells me what your product does, how it helps me, and what makes it different from other solutions.
• Your sub-headline is too long and boring. You use a lot of words to say very little.
• Your hero image is not relevant or appealing. You use a stock photo of a warehouse that doesn't show anything about your product or how it works.
• Your call-to-action button is not visible or enticing. You use a dull gray color that blends in with the background and a generic text that says "Get Started".
• You use generic logos of companies that don't have any connection to your product or industry.
I'm just trying to be honest and helpful. Thank me later:)
There actually aren’t any stock photos. I took screenshots of what I’m building. It is a template but I built everything else. And not sure what logos you are referencing.
Anyway, the rest is good feedback, I’ve been working on trying to get a better headline but it is definitely difficult. Any suggestions on something you would say? (I won’t steal it, just trying to get an idea of where you would approach it from)