Roast My Landing Page! 🔥

Quick roast by Diabolic Design.

First of all, the template you have chosen looks very nice and clean. The animations are cool and well-prepared, but I have a few comments and suggestions for your app. I will list a few of them.

I always have an issue when I see projects like this because personally, Google Calendar is sufficient for me. I can manage my work on my own. But I am not your target audience. Regardless, you still need to build trust with your customers.

1. There is no information about your company's location and who you are. Maybe you could provide more details about yourselves? After all, if someone decides to use your services, they are entrusting their data to someone they don't know. These are critical data, and if I don't know who I'm dealing with, I might not dare to take that step.
2. I would create a page showcasing a case study – a real-life example demonstrating the improvement in calendar organization.
3. You have some aesthetic issues on mobile. It would be helpful to work on margins and paddings in the "II Progress" section.
4. The calendar in the hero section scales poorly on mobile.
5. The calendar in the hero section has arrows that appear clickable but don't do anything.
6. Your chatbot is a bit impolite. It starts the conversation with, "Hi, I want to help you. What is your email address?" It's like starting a conversation with an unknown girl by saying, "Hi, give me your phone number."
7. The pricing section scales poorly on mobile.

By implementing these changes, users should experience a more streamlined and engaging process. If you appreciate my feedback, feel free to upvote my comment or follow me :)

It's not bad:

• i'd start with a bolder claim
• and a simpler sub-sentence
• whilst the page looks 'very cool' you might want to simplify it, because as you scroll down it gets very complex in terms of attention

We're testing our own MVP to help people improve their site-wide copy, we ran your site through it:
https://copybullet.com/reports/eJ02Wc1t

Love to know if the report is helpful (not many elements on the page, but it tried!)

Hi,

• Nice design
• I don't get "Hire AI". I got what it does, but why Hire?
• The cookie banner and the chat is kinda overlapping each other
• Maybe add a social link to your name on the footer?
• Really liked the pre-offer idea, great way to validate.
• I'd say overall I'd like to understand a bit more how it works. A gif/video out of the hero image would be great. Are these cards tasks? Used to see tasks on a list instead. (Not saying it's better to be a list, just saying affordance is not there - a gif/video would help).

Hope that's helpful :) really liked the sleek design. Congrats on finishing this landing page.

May I ask you to also give some feedback about my project's landing page? 🙏
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/feedback-about-landing-page-3eb04a3c27

No idea what it is that you do. Keep in mind that after looking for 3 seconds, if I can't tell what your website is all about, you've failed as a designer.

I don't think case studies are necessary as long as you can showcase your abilities on your website effectively. Personally, I don't think anything feels alive. I'd integrate animations a bit on scroll or when a segment of the page is reached.

Some of your button animations like the 'Request Beta" button at the bottom of the homepage have an experience-breaking animation. It's just too cartoony and tacky. It reflects immaturity and technical inexperience.

I agree with what everyone else has said so far as well.