Roast my landing page!

I cannot scroll to the footer at all on chrome / W10

The colors clash and are a little saturated for my liking.

That said, it's a great concept, trying to determine what makes us happy based on several parameters.

Nice job releasing something!

First, I hate the snap scrolling - finicky at best.
The colors you chose are pretty nice and soft.
You have a lot of space, with little information.

I know this is about your landing page but is that the real UI of your application? I would definitely check out dribbble and get up to date with some different design trends, as this looks like it was done on MS paint.

I'm wondering if this kind of data can be helpful to overcome the limitations of the limbic system? @15:40
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GLtmel8hD1k

Not sure the pain point resolution is fully clarified. Why is it so damn helpful to do this ? My life will/can become X!!

Hi Eliott,
Congratulations on launching your app. Looks very interesting.

I checked the website (am using chrome on Mac) and is cool 👍
I think this app is a visual diary/journal for tracking oneself.
IMHO, this is a very important feature that should be mentioned somewhere above the fold.

When you say "Talk to yourself", I am not sure what that means, but you have wordings to the effect of "maintain a visual journal of yourself or track yourself etc, it makes it more clear".

As far as I see, this is a better version of Daylio https://daylio.webflow.io/ Perhaps you can get some idea about the language from there.

Best of luck

Hey Elliott,

I think the LP looks nice, especially the mobile version. For the "Why" section, I would flip the left and right sections, instead showing the right section of text on the left.

To make the LP easier to consume and scan, I would have a section that lays out the steps involved in interacting with your app. The right hand why section basically does this:

Take a Mirror, rate it, add some tags, then look at the data and figure out what makes you excited to wake up the next morning.

You could take those steps and turn it into a section in the LP that clearly lays out each step, with supporting subtext and/or screenshots.