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Roast my landing page (especially copy)

https://www.typethat.co/
submitted this linkon February 2, 2022
  1. 1

    Super clear! However, one thing I would say is focus on the problem you are solving as opposed to highlighting the core feature (get suggestions for whole sentences or entire paragraphs right inside Google Chrome). That would be a stronger sell!

  2. 1

    Interesting idea @aposded!

    Some wow factors

    • Clear CTA with the short phrase near the CTA to motivate users! Especially "The finance team said no, but we think you deserve the deal. "
    • Easy to understand demo image showing it might work
    • Simple and Crisp

    Some observations
    1. I think you also need to talk about the problems that the product tries to solve, rather than the technicalities(how it works types) of the product. Talking about the problems that it solves directly connects with the customers/users
    2. Heading says "your personal AI secretary" which might set a wrong expectation in viewer's mind where they could assume it is beyond the autosuggestor, at least that's what I thought. So it might need some more thoughts
    3. On clicking the "Join the waitlist", the page loads with the "Get notified" button which is a little unclear. I was hoping it will show me a form to drop the details instead there is a get notified button, there was a bit of a pause or it adds some friction to the UX. So I think the form can be either loaded as soon as the user clicks "join the waitlist" or maybe change the "Get notified" -> "Get started"

    Hope this helps!

  3. 1

    Looks intriguing but hard to say I would pay for it if tools are built in to gmail and apple keyboard. Maybe need some comparisons on how this is different than the built in tools?

  4. 1

    Looks like an interesting project

  5. 1

    A suggestion for a headline:

    Your personal AI writer - guiding you all the way
    or
    Your personal AI secretary - taking care of you all the way.

    A suggestion would be to create a comparison chart between all the other competitors you have.

    If you need more help Lemme know.

  6. 1

    Not bad.

    • Typo in HTML title: 'secretaty'
    • Color contrast between white and gradient buttons isn't good
    • Looks a bit blank, also maybe make the hero image add some shadow (play w/it)
    • Some of the english in the features descriptions is somewhat awkwardly worded

    Overall, I get what you're doing.

  7. 1

    Loved the simplicity of the page and the clarity of the idea that comes with it. Just a couple of minor points:

    1. In the "Why Typethat" section, for the first 2 options, box shadows are not quite visible in the top, it kind of blends in with the white, but the next 2 options have clear box shadows. Feels mildly inconsistent.
    2. I typically like to know the people behind a product, so would like an "About Us" or "Who we are" kind of a link between Privacy Policy and Email Us.
  8. 1

    Nice.

    I knew within 10 seconds what your product does. It's amazing how rare it is to go to a product web site and know within 10 seconds what the product does!

    Maybe reduce the white space in increase the size of the content? I know white space is all the rage, but it kinda dwarfs the content here. The Gmail animation is powerful, I'd like to see it bigger.

    The cyan...magenta colour gradient on the text is a little hard on my eyes! Maybe tone it down, e.g. by darkening it, to make the text more legible?

    Looks great, good luck!

    P.S. "The finance team said no, but we think you deserve the deal." is a really nice touch :)

  9. 1

    I love the simplicity of the design. Not sure how to articulate this (and maybe this is just a personal preference), but I don't love the gradient. Feels overused? Maybe needs more contrast between the white background?

    Also, as an engineer, I initially thought you were offering an API, but it seems like the product is a Chrome extension? I think that could be made more clear.

    Keep up the great work!

  10. 1

    Hero

    Is it a secretary (i.e. who schedules calendar events for me, responds to emails automatically) or a typing helper like an autosuggest feature that's a bit smarter than my phone? "Secretary" might set wrong expectations.

    My first question: How about privacy? What happens to what I type?

    Feature section

    If it deletes my data, how can it generate good suggestions?

    "Helps you work faster" feels kind of obvious.

    "Works as you type": I first thought this meant "Learns as you type"

    CTA

    Love the "The finance team said no, but we think you deserve the deal. "

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    Don't answer the questions to me. Answer them on the website. :)

    But I like how short and concise your site is overall. I think I understand well enough what your product does.

    One last question that I had while typing the previous sentence was: "What is it actually? A desktop software that works across the whole OS? A browser extension?" But I managed to find that out by going back to your page.