Roast my landing page 🔥🔥🔥
Hey folks,
Recently launched my landing page:
👉 https://launchbrew.co/
Would be super awesome to have feedback on:
👉 Do you understand what the product is?
👉 What do you think of the hero section messaging?
👉 What do you think of overall copy?
Would love to hear all critique, feedback & advice.
👉 Do you understand what the product is?
Selling templates for something, but I don't understand for what. Emails? Landing pages?
👉 What do you think of the hero section messaging?
Same as above, it says something very simple, but I don't fully understand what it does, it's like it's missing a word (like "email" templates, "html" templates, "copywriting" templates, etc.).
👉 What do you think of overall copy?
Feels very repetitive, like it's just "get templates" over and over.
Hey @XCS - thanks a lot for the feedback.
Very helpful. Will rework the messaging to make it more specific.
The font size is too large IMO. I feel like I have to take a step back from my monitor to read it more comfortably - or more practically, zoom out the browser.
More visuals would be nice too!
My first thought was, "oh, so like ThemeForest"? But probably that's not it.
Thanks a @LaurensVK for taking time to go through.
Very helpful. Will re-look at the font & the positioning.
👉 Do you understand what the product is?
Could not grasp what it is immediately upon seeing the site, but after some scrolling and thinking I did. So I think it might be better to use more specific wording.
👉 What do you think of the hero section messaging?
I think it looks a little sparse, you should add videos or maybe more images of what the templates might look like.
👉 What do you think of overall copy?
I think the copywriting is fine, it's just the images of the site that needs more work to better show your customers the value.
Speaking of feedback, I would love some feedback on my project as well once I launch, you can follow for updates here https://www.indiehackers.com/product/evoke
We've got a MVP soon so stay tuned!
@RichardGao thanks a lot. Really appreciate it. Will look forward to your launch.
When are you planning to launch ?
Planning to launch this week! Stay tuned.
Awesome, All the best. Do drop me a note https://www.linkedin.com/in/mohantysanat/
Will keep a look out.
Best,
Hi Sanat! I understand what the product is. My advice would be to add one image or video. The reason for this is that it has too much text and it is great to disrupt that. Overall I like your landing page for Launchbrew. Continue the good work!
Hey @JMDuarte98 thanks a lot for the kind words.
Working on creating a demo video.
Quick question on the idea - Do you think such a marketplace will be useful for indie-makers ?
As a fellow founder, I believe most of us lack of marketing skills! so probably is going to be useful. Good luck!
Thanks for quick inputs :)