Roast my landing page!

I made an update based on your recommendations! https://convertkit.comparecourses.dev/

The website is simple and short - great! You managed to explain the actual import points easily. You could use one more CTA at the second part (Maybe like test it now).
Your header is good! It did catch my eyes, but I would not do more than 3 font sizes.

If you have feedback for me paperless.io I would like to hear it

Hi Sandor,

I'm a Front-end developer myself. Here is a feedback from my perspective:

Positives:

1. Personal image.
2. Linking other profiles like Github, portfolio etc.

Improvements:

1. As a developer, I would love to see your name and what you do right at the top with your picture.
2. It was too long. Took so much time to get to the point and I had to check your profile on LinkedIn and personal website to get what you do.
3. The value proposition gets lost in the text. I would like to see it in a bold heading at the top.
4. It currently talks more about you. Make it more about the developers you want to help.
5. If you do want to go long text road then add testimonials to supplement it. Maybe add the WHY you started it. And use subheadings to make it easier to skim the text.

Hope this helps.

I thank each of you for valuable comments! What you say is so obvious now!

My 3 main suggestions.

1. Too long
You're inviting people to a free newsletter.

If 2-3 lines don't convince them, more will just make them bored.

On a sales page you have:

• more details to explain,
• the customer has more at risk (so he wants more info).

Here there's no risk, so keep it shorter. Or if you think the info are necessary, put at least the form to subscribe above the fold.

2. What's the problem?
What pain do you target?
Becoming a developer is the solution you offer, but the starting situation is important.

It will explain to the reader if this newsletter is relevant for his situation.

Think of a title like: "Your job is a blocked road?"
At that point you can say: "Get a career with endless potential, become a web developer..."

If I am in that situation I know you have something relevant for me.

(This normally is the trickiest part, if you have different option for the title, I'm happy to help)

3. Put the juicy part on top
A new visitor is not really interested in your story.

First he wants to know what's in it for him. Then maybe he will investigate better your background.

Above the fold you need to have an immediate CTA for subscription.

After that is better to start with what the subscriber can find inside your newsletter.

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Let me know if this makes sense for you.

I left some comments on the website here: https://capsule.click/commentary/ae0421ec-3440-4f8a-98ca-039f9387651a
I overall didn't get the feeling that I would subscribe (but I'm not the target audience)

I think it's a little text heavy. Are you targeting people interested in front end development? Break up the text with picture/gifs of things they might learn from you.

Also, from the text, it doesn't appear that English is your native language. That's not a bad thing, it's just that an english speaking person reading the site might be wary if they think the quality of the content might not be up to standard or confusing.