Roast my landing page for Tweet Verita
Hi all,
My name is Nuno Bispo, currently living in the Netherlands but originally from Portugal.
In the last 2 years, I started my Indie Hacker journey and started building side projects.
This is my 3rd product already but still learning about being an entrepreneur.
My new product is Tweet Verita here you can discover the truth about your brand and your competitors on Twitter.
Currently preparing my PH launch.
What do you see when checking my landing page: https://tweet-verita.developer-service.io/
Is it clear the proposition value and what can be achieved with the SaaS?
Best regards,
Nuno Bispo
Looks nice overall!
In addition to what @lgaud already pointed out, clicking "Get started" immediately prompts me to authorise your app to access my Twitter account. I would rather be taken to a page that explains how it works first, and why it needs access to my account. Also, I'm never going to authorise an app that lacks a privacy policy.
The video under "Easy to use Dashboard and Statistics" is quite small and cannot be played in full-screen mode; I had to open it in YouTube to see it properly. And, there's no audio, so it's not super clear what it's showing. (Side note: I'm building VideoNarrate, a tool that lets you add AI voice narration to any video.)
As to the value proposition in general, I think maybe you could highlight the benefits a bit more? What I mean is, say not just what the customer can see, but also what they can do with that information, like grow their audience or whatever.
Thanks for the feedback.
I was already planning to build a login landing page, to make it more user-friendly.
About the privacy policy and terms & conditions, that are lacking, it is still on my to-do list before the PH launch.
I like VideoNarrate, will take a look at it.
Definitely, I see what you mean about video size, your video is much much better.
The colors and overall design are nice!
With your lead paragraph, I think it's supposed to be "we can show you..." not when (when is definitely wrong!).
It feels like there's a lot of empty space between the Get Started button and the graphic.
"We track all the tweets about you" gives me a slightly stalker vibe :) "We track all the tweets about your brand" might feel a bit less personal?
I wonder if it's necessary to say powered by Amazon in the Sentiment Analysis section? Your customers probably don't care and you might want to change the API you use at some point.
The red and green colors in your graph are not distinguishable for red/green color blindness which is reasonably common. Check them through a filter like this one: https://www.toptal.com/designers/colorfilter/
The graph color scheme also doesn't line up with your brand colors. I've found this tool useful for coming up with a color palette for visualizations: https://projects.susielu.com/viz-palette
Thanks for the feedback, definitely some typos that I need to fix.
Good point about mentioning Amazon might change that in the future.
Thanks for the tip on the color palette and color blindness.