Roast My Landing Page - Patturn!
Happy Monday Everyone!
I am excited to release the new landing page for my startup. Click in the link below to see!
Patturn is a platform to help you manage and sell customer returns.
If you've ever seen a Youtube video of guy that purchases "Amazon Returns Pallets", this is what I'm referring to!
He might be able to process 1 or 2 pallets, but if he were to manage 20 to 30 pallets or even scale up his operation, he will need a dedicated system in place to manage all of it.
We are adding new features on a continually basis, based on internal testing the feedback from early beta-testers. In addition, we are still looking for beta-testers to try out the platform as well.
We look forward to feedback that we get! Thank you in advance!
Hey Dennis.
The website looks great. I have only two minor suggestions.
The dashboard preview image is very small. Maybe you can add a zoom if you hover over it with the mouse, or click. Or make the page wider for larger screens.
The blue bottom border for the link text, e.g. "EXPLORE RETURNS MANAGEMENT" has a very low contrast to the brown background.
I can't give you feedback on the product or the copy, because I'm no industry expert.
👋 Heya,
Sounds like a sound concept in a niche market, so if there is room to grow I'm sure you'll do fine.
Only 2 suggestions from me:
It should say "Patturn's powerful enterprise tools empower you..."
Hopefully that's helpful!
I am also looking for some feedback on my landing page - would you mind having a quick look? https://sites.google.com/view/docata/case-study
Cheers
Sam
I agree with @whereismypen about the small dashboard image. At first I didn't think I'd be a fan of the brown color, but I actually really like it. Nothing screams packages like a brown background. I'm sure UPS would agree! 😉 It's a good example of how you can use colors to convey messages and sentiment on a landing page.