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Roast my landing page pls

You know the deal: light it on fire
RankReach.io

on September 5, 2023
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    Looks like a pretty decent start! I like the clean design. The copy is friendly to read.

    Areas I would improve:

    1. It's not immediately clear what you mean by "campaigns". Further down the page it becomes clear that you mean "email campaigns", but I had to work to figure that out. If I wasn't actively "roasting" your page, I probably wouldn't have bothered.

    2. What's the connection between email marketing and backlinks? Unless I'm out to lunch, one is about engaging your audience and the other is about SEO. They don't seem particularly related. Should these be separate products? Or are you building a CRM that can compete with HubSpot and Salesforce at the entry level?

    3. Address objections. @vvardi suggested FAQs, which are a great place to address them. (If you don't know what objections people might have, you haven't done the groundwork of getting feedback on your product yet.)

    4. Show me some social proof: Ratings, # of users, testimonials, etc. Something objective that tells me your product is awesome to other people too, not just you.

    5. Tell me your story. You can put this at the end, but I want to know why you made RankReach. What problem(s) are you solving? Why was nothing else on the market a viable solution? The people who relate to your problems are the ones who will be most interested in this product.

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      Love this - working on updating the copy and working on social proof.

      on 2 - the niche I'm specifically targeting at the moment are "independent bloggers", for whom guest post outreach and backlinks are tightly coupled. Its a small market - to your point, it can be expanded in the fiture.

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    Consider using a different color for the CTA buttons, as the same color is used for the icons background and the buttons in ... the movie (Add campaign) and tawk-chat. A distinctive color for CTA is more effective in drawing the eye.

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    yo!! made a quick video for you with some actionable feedback ->

    https://video.drift.com/v/abPdgtJn1tBCSZ0TaSAYkRS4xsZK6aPqRsRrlY5rH14s/

    imo you should consider revamping your landing page and flesh things out more - you can get a landing page facelift here

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    Looks very nice!
    -I would remove the "pill" outline/button shape for "select our pioneer..." the arrow identifies a link.
    -I would also do "log in" button blue.
    -The image on the background looks nice, I think if it could stretch over the length of the page would be nicer. Maybe consider using pattern instead?
    -I would reconsider the font on the buttons. Either to make spacing between letters or increase the size a bit and use regular or light font, instead of bold option.
    -Maybe use outlined buttons instead of filled? so they are differentiate from the icon boxes. Or maybe remove boxes around icons and make them blue?

    • footer needs to be centered and have a registration date and company name. Maybe some social media links as well?
    • With buttons, I would go further and round them even more, so they are in "pill" shape.

    For the pricing page, I would make sure that the central box on this page and a home page have the same corner radius. I would also consider placing the copy to the gray background that currently used for right side on pricing. The "outlined" shape is not used on this web site, and filled shape might help to keep consistency. or maybe this page can be used without box frame at all.

    Hope it helps!

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      Good point on the buttons. I'll play around with it a bit and see if I can improve the visuals here. I think I did play around with the font on the buttons originally but eventually marked as "good enough" and continued on.

      Corner radius... you definitely have a better eye than mine, ha

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    Clean design, looks great! The copy’s easy to understand as well and clearly highlights the benefits. However, I do feel like I’m missing some visuals for each of your features. Maybe try using some screenshots here to illustrate your product for people who don’t want to watch the whole video.

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    The footer looks weird on mobile, and the burger menu is empty (not sure it it's WIP)

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    The layout is nice, but the inactive side bar links need to be fixed.

    One small point of feedback. The little dots used to denote a badge don't feel right. For example, the dot above "Free Email Verifier" evokes, for me, those spammy ads with fake badges on sketchy websites. The dots do draw the eye. However, as a design decision, I would personally avoid that sort of thing. Others might perceive them differently.

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      Which sidebar links? On mobile? Definitely need to fix - appreciate the heads up.

      On the dot - I was a bit torn on it in the same fashion. Probably something worth AB testing

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        I was viewing the website on my laptop. The sidebar next to the video didn't have working buttons. I was using the Edge browser.

        Yeah. The dot is ultimately a design decision. I'd be curious to hear the results of your AB test when you get to it!

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    Hey, looks cool. What I would add:

    • Reviews from Twitter or any social media (it will add more trust)
    • FAQs
    • Some sections with cases or possible metrics after using your product
      Thank you
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      Thanks! Working on reviews and testomonials at the moment :)

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    Looking like a great start! Visually it's in a good place. Check out my Loom video for some feedback.

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      Awesome feedback! I will definitely reach out soon :)

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        Look forward to it