Roast my landing page / product
Hey hey!
Starting a new product and this time we'd like to do this in a wiser way:
- I had the idea to create a new platform where people can easily sell their digital products.
- I talked to potential customers and learned their needs and pain points from current solutions
- I created some mockups of the product in figma
- I then created a landing page
I want you to roast my product and landing page 👇🏻
One more easy test: pick one buyer type and rewrite the hero around that exact person instead of digital products in general. When the niche is sharper, the trust gap usually drops fast.
If useful, I can mock a tighter hero + subhead directly against your current copy.
Follow-up idea: add a tiny objection-handling strip (time to value, setup effort, risk) before the first CTA. This often unlocks clicks from interested-but-hesitant visitors.
If useful, I can mock this directly against your existing copy so it’s fast to ship.
I think when you are not first to market. You cannot be the sell anything to anyone. You need to niche down. Otherwise you will get some customers but I doubt it will be sustainable. When you have zero competition and a burning problem that is when you can let your customers shape the product.
Landing page looks good but can be improved on mobile.
However with regards to product I guess you have tough competition as there are many such marketplaces like etsy & more.
Guess you have better chance if you can niche down to anyone 1 unique category first and the scale other categories.
All the best.
Looks quite good. PageSpeedTest shows good performance.
https://pagespeed.web.dev/analysis/https-www-pocketsflow-com/xmcsmnyfwg?form_factor=mobile
Some technical improvements can be made.
Design wise, I would suggest redesigning the top nav bar. It looks like a search field, but it is not.
Re: SEO the H1 tag might have a keyword you are targeting such as: " sell digital products" ...
Document does not have a meta description
Image elements do not have [alt] attributes
What were these ?
Were they from both buyer and seller perspective, or only seller?
I am wondering why yet another B2C and B2B well intended marketplace platform. I would like to see the potential customers verbatims'. The feedback. I don't want context to be lost.
The platform feels very seller orientated and does not inspire to visit. Why would I change from where I currently go?
I opened your page on small mobile screen, Headline is looking too big for me.
Also its looking bit shaky on mobile, banner at the top and centering of steps is looking bit offsetted to the right.
But whats important I get the idea what the product does after while.
Personally I would get rid off fires and earth too. (Not fitting to design)
Otherwise as a complete stranger I would say that page is looking good
I second the mobile opinion here after checking out the site on my phone.
Hey Chain! This is amazing, congrats.
If I may ask, what is different from Gumroad or the likes?
Hello Snehal, thank you so much!
The main different things are having the ability to select from multiple design choices for your product pages. As well as some integrated AI tools to help you get your products to market faster. Another thing is definitely not charging the 10% fee they charge.
Overall, I think the layout is clean and has a nice design. I'm not a fan of the fire and earth emojis they don't quite fit style-wise. I know you were probably trying make the headline look more fun, so in that case you might be better off using icons that match the theme of your website.
Also, not to knock your overall branding too much, but I have honestly seen the blue-purple-pink gradients so often with new websites that no one is standing out anymore and as a result your images look the same as dozens of images I've seen before regardless of them representing your product.
You may want to consider that if you want your product to stand out from the crowd.
Nonetheless, I wish you all the best!
Look good to me. Nice design and easy to read, do I understand correctly it is similar gumroad ?
The pricing part was not clear though
The idea is great and the landing page is beautiful. As for the service it can be difficult to attract and retain sellers and buyers . Anyway i ll be watching your website.
Hi, Chain, I have thought about is idea several times and even went further to explore how Rewardful works, I love the idea and I can see something big coming out of this.
I'm a UIUX designer with 4 years experience, I will love to partner with you to build is into a working platform if you don't mind.
But know that i really love the idea, and looking forward to your feedback.
I think the visual design is quite great (like the use of emojis as icons) but I think your USP needs to be highlighted better if you have one in order to differentiate this from other tools to sell digital products (Like Gumroad).