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Roast my landing page + signup (learning) process

by betaben

Been iterating through different landing page styles and sign up processes and think I've landed on something that converts well and lets me gather some info about my sign ups.

But I can probably do better so roast me below!

https://nodeco.webflow.io

Some background
I've just come out of another company and been pandering over the last 3 weeks or so about what I'm going to do next. A lot of people say (and have told me) getting a job in another startup to learn from is a good idea (which it probably is) but I want to keep building.

So I'm looking for some part time work at startups or even freelancing to keep me going so I can hopefully make the best of both. In the mean time I'm trying not to force out ideas and just keep an eye out for interesting things + test them. :)

Anyway, do your best to roast me pls

betaben's avatarbetaben
on December 15, 2020
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    Nice simple landing page. A couple of suggestions:

    1. The headline "Build faster with useful no code templates". The words "no code" can separate depending on the size of the screen. I saw:

    Build faster with useful no
    code templates

    I suggest making "nocode" one word or perhaps "no-code" to make sure these words stay together. Otherwise, it really diminishes the impact of your message. Also, do you really need to work "useful"? "Build faster with no-code templates" is powerful as is. Or maybe "Build faster with proven no-code templates".

    1. The pink call to action with white text is very soft, and a bit hard to read. Considering making this button brighter with contrast.

    2. "learn more" is a generic call to action. Can you think of something with more punch and value? "Start Building Now"?

    Thanks for sharing your page and putting it up for suggestion. Good luck!

    Revgabba's avatar Revgabba
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      Thanks for the feedback Michelle!

      Will get on fixing that but with the text, it was just me being lazy with how I formatted. 'no-code' is probably better also

      Yes the buttons need work but not sure how. may make the text black ad opposed to white for more contrast.

      I prefer 'start building now' too.

      Thanks for the tips!

      betaben's avatar betaben
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    I love it. It's great that it's response too. Nice and simple is always the best!

    Flurly's avatar Flurly
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    I like the use of colors. Agree that the no code and node co type is a little confusing on the eyes.

    benmarks224's avatar benmarks224
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