Roast My landing page. Too Simple? Too minimalistic? (Update from the last post, V2 launched)

Hey guys!
Last month, I posted the landing page of my website asking for feedback and got reviews from you all. Thanks, I really appreciate it. I just launched the v2 of the website with better UI and customer experience.

I hope to hear review from you all. Thanks

Joy Oguntona

submitted this linkon July 22, 2023

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Hey Joy, saw your post on Indie Hackers asking to "Roast my landing page. Too simple? Too minimalistic?" for Letternerd.

I appreciate the honesty! While minimalism can be powerful, sometimes it can obscure key value propositions. I noticed your page could benefit from a more strategic use of visual hierarchy to highlight what makes Letternerd unique.

I specialize in crafting high-converting landing pages that are both stylish and strategic, designed to capture attention and drive conversions. Happy to send over a DM conversation with 3 specific UI/UX ideas that could elevate Letternerd. Interested?

ProProGrammer

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Hey Joy! I thought to add some thoughts on the landing page as I am also building something new and know how important is to nail the landing page!
1. Do you have anyone who have used the product? If so I'd add any testimonial straight below the first button. This is social proof. This is what will convince me if I don't know if I would buy it or not.
2. I suggest also adding some contact details :) Will make me feel it's more real than just another web without information! And as it's still free and seems very friendly, I would even add a note at the bottom with a few words on why you built this and your name. People buy into people :)
Otherwise, seems nice! Although I had a question on if it's just a letter structure template or a kind of Grammarly that helps me to write the words.

Thanks a lot and hope this helps!

Ilai
(Here's my landing: getdolphin.ai)
Ilaiszp

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  Thank you Ilai! I will add a testimonial as advised to make it more personalised and the same with the contact details.
  
  For your question, It generates the whole letter content and then adds it to an image template that you choose. You can try it out to see how it works, take less than a minute.
  
  I just went over your website, it is so clean and structured. I will incorporate the how it Works structure section into my website too.
  
  Thanks for your feedback! Really appreciate
  
  Joy Oguntona
  
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    Awesome! If I can help with anything let me know! Sounds great :)
    
    Ilaiszp
    
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Hey @obhox,

I've reviewed your landing page and given you some feedback here - https://thesaaspilgrimage.com/case-studies/letternerd-landing-page-audit

I liked the product! As it’s free and doesn’t require sign-up I used it. Not sure how the business model is going to work, but you’ll definitely get people to convert when they land on this page.

Interested to hear your thoughts about my comments (I'm no landing page expert - yet), happy to discuss them here or via Twitter/email.

All the best!

RyanRobinsonUk

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  Thanks Ryan,
  
  I really appreciate the detailed comment on your website. I will follow the recommendations.
  
  I follow you on Twitter. I hope to discuss this further from there.
  
  Kind regards
  
  Joy Oguntona
  
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    Awesome!
    
    Looking forwards to seeing the changes
    
    RyanRobinsonUk
    
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