Roast my landing page - V2

Hi all,

First of all, I want to thank this community. The feedback is more than I could imagine, and really helps me iterate to a better product.

Please drop me a link in the comments to your landing page!
I would be happy to give feedback for mutual learnings.

Monday I launched my start-up Segro (https://segro.app/).

I have received a lot of feedback on my landing page at the following post on IH:
https://www.indiehackers.com/post/roast-my-landing-page-for-my-just-launched-app-ec0938dea9

I created this post since, besides maybe some more feedback, I wanted to share this progress.
Maybe other Indie Hackers can learn from the mistakes I made with my landing page v1.

Before I did any adjustments, I created a screenshot from the previous version for comparison:

Segro landing page v1

Please, let me know if Segro is directly clear to you or the information is too much.

Below, I grouped some feedback from my previous post, to make the progress of this optimisations clear.

Site load/UX issues

the site won't load for me for some reason
The site does take some time to load
The first thing that I wanted to do when I viewed the site on my mobile was to zoom-in on the first image so I can see the product better, but zoom doesn't work.
The low contrast on the category labels made it hard for me to read

Features

Remove "Dark theme" from the features because from the images it looks like its the default.
What does "Future foresight" mean or do?
I think more text is needed. For instance, the feature "calendar insights" needs to be explained or demonstrated. It is not obvious.
Need more detail on what the features are. Maybe follow a framework like FAB (Features, Advantages, Benefits) or similar when talking about what your product has.

Why?

Why should I try your app? What's the advantage?

How?

I’m a newb but I wanna still lose old habits, how do I get started, do you suggest some bad habits to eliminate automagically?
I’m not sure how it works. Is it a new calendar system that I need to set up? Or does it work alongside existing calendars?
missing HOW will this help me to stop bad habits. Just knowing isn't enough. I guess setting goals is important. If I don't have enough sports events in my calendar, maybe you should suggest to add. E.g. send me push notification with suggestion.

Clear enough?

Like others said here, I didn't get the product idea immediately.
I sort of get the gist of what Segro is, but not really. Some more info above the fold would help, i.e., a subheading under your main heading text.

What’s missing

The site does not mention the product's USP.
If your approach is to show rather then tell, consider including a video of the product
The "insights" image is not clear. I cannot see the details shown.
Testimonials: Who else tried this app....and did it work for them?
you should upload the screenshots you have on the website to your app store listing
Newsletter: I’m actually interested in the idea, tried writing down what I did each hour on paper before but never stuck with it. Do you have a newsletter you could link on your website, for interested Android users like me?
I like the clean design, but it feels a little too empty.