Roast my landing please!

• Don't auto play videos.
• Try it now is a bit slow to render the registration page, got a waiting things twice
• The page is ok, it has an old retro look but I think for your niche you might have deliberately wanted it and it could be positive.
• I dislike the top of full with where you have the hero next to the video, it's neither here nor there kinda thing... maybe you can make the video smaller and put it on top, people can click full screen and such I don't think the video needs the size it gets like on half width it's full page width..
• Column titles shouldn't have underscores, I think non programmers hate these. Should probably have title capitalisation. Referencing Codebook.png, it could do with some more design clean-up to separate columns, I think this image has importance in the sale process here

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Color scheme is a bit off. Navigation text green color just doesn't work with the dark background. Also don't like the full width hero section. To much text and screenshots.

Hi Pablo,

Your landing page might be great, but I don't know what is being sold or what your ideal customer profile is. Can you explain further before we try to roast?