Roast my MVP landing page
Hello!
Please take a look at cosmopad.org
The product doesn't exist yet. I want to test if there is interest monitoring conversions.
I never created a landing page before and I'm a total newbie in copywriting and marketing.
Thank you.
Hey Alessio! I recorded a 10-minute video review of your landing page here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nZPih5OMkEo
Hopefully this is helpful! Let me know if you have any questions.
Wow! That's incredible and so helpful!
I'll make some suggested changes as soon as possible.
I don't understand a thing.
Why to put "Ready to get started" just under the Hero section?
There would be two Call to action close together.
I read in tutorials that CTA should be all along the page.
If i put "Ready to get started" under Features section I have one CTA on the top, one middle-ish and one at bottom.
That is definitely something worth thinking about. For me, having too many CTA's makes it easy for your users to overlook them. It will be different for every company / page but in your case I think the page is short enough to only have two CTA's. A good example to look at is Tuple.
The headline of the website should be the primary benefit that your product provides to your target audience. So I would make your tagline "Learn to observe the sky
using brain and curiosity" as your headline instead. But "Learn" is a high-friction word. Very few people like to learn. They like to get results. What do your users want to do after learning astrology? What do they use it for? You should use that as your headline.
Hi,
Website looks great. I just think that you should add a single line about what exactly you product is & does: Ex. 'Cosmopad is a website that lets you view the sky at night' or something on those lines.