Roast my new landing page - Best roast gets 1 month free.
So, last week I launched bubbleleads.com and it went pretty well!
But, after looking over the page a few times, I knew I was missing some valuable info and it possibly could have converted better.
So, I just did the following changes;
- Added "How does it work".
- Changed the CTA.
- Adjusted the text so it's so not so large.
- Added a visual flow chart.
- Changed a lot of black text to grey/white.
- Added a "Got a question?" WhatsApp CTA.
Is there anything you don't understand? Anything I could improve or even add?
Also, yes, the banner is there due to a PH launch this week - Feel free to take advantage of the offer in advance 🤫
Any feedback is highly appreciated!
@Consultily Here is my feedback. I hope it is helpful https://screencast-o-matic.com/watch/cYi1085zMu.
The page's clear, easy to follow, and, most importantly, shows an example of what buyers get out of it.
What I'm not clear on: who is your ideal client + how does BubbleLead contribute to getting big deals.
From POW of a potential buyer:
Ideally, you'll have testimonials or survey results showing that your existing subscribers are getting results (and, while it's nice to have a $$$ amount, it can also be time savings, or "% of our customers say that our product has helped them close a deal")
"Rated 5/5" is good, but not aligned with the promise.
Objection: contact info is good, but then I need to do the work of reaching out - and there's no guarantee this'll bring me the deals.
Scarcity (3 out of 20): I'd agitate more towards the end of the page, after describing all the benefits of using BubbleLeads + focus on the benefit for your customers - they'll not be coming across as spam, their outreach'll be more effective, they'll be able to stand out because they won't be 1 out of 20 emails hitting a CEO's inbox at the same moment
"Unique list" + : tell me more about the selection process + verification process + random cycling, so I can be sure it's not something I can find somewhere else (for free?)
FAQs: "Why would I need this" - I'd cut this - if website visitors made it this far, they're likely clear on the why.
What happened to your producthunt page?
Deleted it, it never went live. I'm gathering feedback first.
Ur website is more pink than my rare cooked steak
🤣🤣🤣
Hi Morgan, I think it's a clean website (think pink hurts my eyes a little :D), the message is quite clear.
But for me, you need to sell more on why your list can 'closing the deal'. The how it works is simple steps, but for no 3. I think it needs a whole separate section for you to sell it to the visitors.
Thank you for your feedback!
👆 That's my roast 😂
I was already on their back aha! I think it should be fixed now :))
I like the look but confused by the model. Best case scenario you make $1k/month?
Also, I don't want to whatsapp you from the get go, that means giving you my number, a simple live chat would be best.
My main issue is that I am not particularly sure if this is for me or not - sure, I want to close a few big deals, but reading further, it seems that I will only get leads of tech companies that have some form of investment. Who is your client? Is this for indie hackers selling SaaS? is this for marketing agencies?