Hi,
I had this idea for some time and have an MVP ready to launch. I'd love to get some feedback, good, bad, and ugly around my landing page and product idea.
Is the offer/ messaging clear?
Does the page show the value the product will bring?
What should I start, stop, and continue doing?
I am going to start reaching out to potential customers and would love to hear the IH community thoughts.
https://teal-coconut-a7m8.squarespace.com/
PW: Gv
Thank you for all your input!!! much love to all IH!
I checked the landing page, but I don't understand what the product is:
I understand it is an app for sharing information, but I don't understand what it does specifically for the senior facilities that any other data-sharing application doesn't.
I think you should choose a specific market to target
You're trying to speak with Business managers and Parents at the same time?
Remember "If you're selling to everyone, you're selling to no one."
"Empower Your Staff and Save Your Senior Living Facility Money."
Ok, but how you will empower it? it's a app? a spreadsheet?
-I think WHAT IT IS and HOW it will empower my staff, should be CLEAR in the HEADLINE
"We provide the ability to share information, reduce administrative tasks, improve staff productivity and accountability, resulting in cost savings for the facility."
-"We provide the ability..." i think this have the same issue as the above one, it is not clear enough the WHAT + HOW + WHY
Talking about UI/UX:
-i think you should have a clear CTA under the Headline
-There's so much text in the landing page, i think you should separate benefits in bullet points
-You have so much WHITE in your LP... i got tired of continue scrolling the page very fast
-The images in a retangular is very weird, imo it should have transparent background
If you're planning to launch soon, i would recommend you to use a landing page TEMPLATE and focusing your energy more on copy/product/making sure WHO ARE THE USERS, and they WANT from your product
I hope my feedback help in you in some way, English isn't my first language
so because of it there's so much repetition and bad grammar
Thank you @Throwawaymfer! I really appreciate you taking the time to have a look and leaving some meaningful feedback. You have brought up some great points and I'm grateful for your suggestions. Have a great day!