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⛽ Roast my Productized Service Site

Launching a new productized service.

Would love feedback if this makes you want to learn more or not.

https://www.simplicity.ooo/

Cheers

on August 21, 2023
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    It's a good idea to show a portfolio.
    Not such a good idea to ask for money close to main message of site.

    Pedro

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      Hi Pedro, thanks for your comment.

      What do you mean by "ask for money so close to the main message of the site".
      Are you saying I shouldn't ask for people to click to buy my subscription?

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        What i am saying is to put the prices only in the plans. Not in a message ... this message ...

        "You invest $2k/month. For that you get dedicated design work from a Senior UX designer. This way we replace a full-time $120k/year Senior Designer and generate a positive ROI on your investment."

        Don't talk about money in messages. And remove that "view pricing" button. You already have that option in the top menu. :)

        Pedro

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    I love the chat-like style. Really creative. And the copy hit the right spots!

    Just 2suggestions:

    • Remove the "open for work" in the hero section, and replace it with "Only X spots left"
    • Add more space between testimonials and near elements. I feel like they don't stand out enough.