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Hey Dennis! I'll tell you what I think (from the mobile view because most people will see that):

• I like the design & colors a lot, very clean.
• In my opinion, I think the title is too broad, I would have been more specific while keeping it as short, explaining the value you provide (the problem you solve).
• The thing distinctive about your product is that people needs to follow you to unlock something, but in order to see that they need to scroll a bit. I would have mentioned something about that before, maybe in the value proposition or subtitle.
• I really like the visual explanation you made about the product, I'd say that if you would have put that right at the start substituting the other decorative graphic, you could have solve the previous thing I pointed it out.
• If I were your target audience, I would have tried it out, but future Twitter super follows seems to unlock similar functionalities so I would need to check which one would give me the best value or have the best features. Your advantage is that you will be able to add more unconventional features (you can launch riskier features, which could end up in higher rewards)

Finally, I just wanna mention that everybody should check out this guide for landing pages, one of the top posts from IH: www.indiehackers.com/post/my-step-by-step-guide-to-landing-pages-that-convert-9daefb2064

I truly wish you the best mate!

Hi Dennis,

1. Yes, the value is clear.
2. Yes, I can get more followers this way - but at what cost - need to know if this is free forever.
3. Design is very good especially given your time investment - Hail Tailwind!

I love this thing! You force an exchange between something of value and a simple follow which most people consider as nearly zero value to give out. Its a "get something for nearly nothing" machine. Okay like other's pointed out the problem is right here: "Share exclusive content with your followers" what you really offer is "Share exclusive content
in exchange for guaranteed followers"

The logo is so generic you should either ditch it or commit to a real one - yeah I get it - what image conveys what this does? tricky...

Thought about the explainer graphic - under the person with the stuff to share (files, coupons, links) maybe show a closed lock or a red X, repeat the three items under the followers on the right showing it unlocked or with a green check.

Consider Monetizing it thusly: a user gets the first link or two from you for free - they see the value - they have a cool tweet that offers something of value that's hot enough for someone to click follow in order to get it - they end up with 10-100-1000 followers or whatever where in the past they would have gained 5 - instant addiction occurs - then you sell a 10 pack of links for $19.95 - the user needs to be able to track the ones he has used but that could just be a checkmark is a user portal, let them recycle them, whatever - avoid complexity here like the plague. You could even just send them ten links and tell them to keep their own records to start. The full blast would be a real pro dashboard, another $20/year for pro access but lifetime use of the links at about $2 each (or whatever, $10 each?)

Alternate pricing - $2/link for 500 uses, $5/link for unlimited/lifetime - sold in packs. Price based on the number of links X either number of followers/uses or duration of link - add upsell steps.

I am going to email you something about this as well..

Hi, @dennis_zoma!

From the standpoint of conveying what your SaaS offers I think your website is pretty clear.

Would I sign up? I don't know. For example, I would like to know how easy is it to disconnect my account if I'm not satisfied.

I do like the design, it works, but as you've said it's reminiscent of many other landing pages. But that's not necessarily a bad thing. For some people it can communicate trustworthiness I think.

One last thing, that arrow at the bottom pointing at "Create Free Account" button seems a bit distorted/stretched, I don't know why.

All in all, I like it!

I like the design and will signup

Hey Dennis,

I don't understand what the product does? The functionality isn't clear for me. The value proposition is great, but how does your product deliver the value isn't clear.

Cheers, Dimi