Roast my site and I’ll “roast” yours!

Landing is super clear and after spending ~2mins on the site I'm completely aware what you offer.

Only thing I'd change is that weird "wavy" animation when you hover on underlined words, e.g "cold hard cash" since I found it super distracting.

My site is https://notify-me.rs/ and simply put - We can track websites that you are interested in, and each time they change, you'll get a color coded update with the changes straight into email inbox. Our aim is to provide super simple UI so you don't ever have to input more than site url, name and optionally some keywords.

Hi @GetHimMama, First thing I should point out, right before "30 day
money-back guarantee" section, the section above that sort of looks weird visually. The dude with the crowns head is really small and the image is completely off

Also, the checkmarks look weird with that 3d effect. would remove black box shadow effect or make it lighter and blurred out I would think.

I'm not a fan of the wavy underlines. it seems overkill and looks weird.

Your pricing is a bit weird seeming. Why not charge per page rather than offering a second plan that says the whole site? Might be useful for users who only need certain pages roasted.

I feel having testimonials at very top is adding a bit much to above fold.

Any feedback on https://obeatow.com would be great.

I like the order of things.
Meaning, you start with a great headline and then immediately show an example of an audit.
Then, you dive right into your customer's pain points and get them hungry for a solution that you feed them in the very next section.
This leaves the rest of the page to go over logistics and explaining how that problem will be solved.

Neat and tidy delivery, great idea.

I also like how you give yourself a 2-week turnaround window and focus on the audits themselves, rather than the implementation of the design changes. They are paying for your expertise, not your technical services.

My site is https://retinadesign.co
A graphic design firm operating on a subscription model.
Technically, a productized service but I feel the subscription idea communicates it better.

I signed up for a quick tip so that's fine if you want to address feedback there! I'm excited!

Yeah, wow I'm in love with this design. Going through this alone was beneficial for my design education. Your level of experience is super immediately evident.

A couple things I noticed:

• The bottom left comment on the Hero screenshot has some funky grammar (I think). "darkers" should be "darker"?
• Maybe the icons for the thumbs up and thumbs down could be more differentiated? Maybe by having a different icon for each, like X's and check marks or something. Or having different icons detailing the bullet points? (like you have for the "What will I get out of the report" section). But idk, that might make it too cluttered. Just a thought.

Things I love:

• Button styling is super satisfying
• Very clear offering
• Not sure if it's intentional, but the parallels to your product being like Grammarly for Web Design (with the squiggly underlines and suggestions in the screenshots) is really cool.
• I would pay for this, absolutely, if I was at that point with a product.
• Love the little doodle man and color scheme across the whole page. It feels very cohesive.
• Love all the animations. They ride that line of not being too much, but still being very intentional.

I don't have a product landing page yet, just a personal site:
https://www.wattsupjaz.com/

If you're willing, I'd super appreciate any design insight you have. And best of luck with your service!

Some notes as I read your landing page:

• I like those buttons! Very cool.
• The report in the screenshot looks very good. Nice and clear.
• The horizontal scrolling carousel is very cool. I wanted to see some of the screenshots but couldn't because my resolution is too low. Not a big issue though.
  "Recommendations unique to your cool brand" The word "cool" seems unnecessary here. Not all brands are cool!
• I'm not sure why you're focusing on DTC, surely you could provide reports for lots of different websites?
• Typo "Easy to read and uderstand"
• Seems like you have a conflict, in the middle you say "1 week of design work", then at the bottom you say "2 week turnaround"

Overall really good!

Here's my landing page:
https://bankstatementconverter.com/