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by Tony Ramirez

We help cities design and optimize business recruitment strategies, and we explain it in a way that you can actually understand.

www.plazasource.com

Is it clear what we do?
Is there any gray area that makes the read confusing?
Are the colors too bold?

Appreciate the feedback as we start working on inbound content strategy.

on November 21, 2022

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Hey Tony, I would work more on the "hero section". First of all, I don't understand what "job growth" headline means. It's the most important part because if you don't catch me with the headline, I'll leave the page without scrolling down.

jacobp

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  Thanks @jacobp, really appreciate the feedback. We updated the headline to now read: "Marketing Cities for Economic Prosperity"
  
  What: Its marketing for cities
  Outcome: Economic prosperity
  
  What do you think?
  
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