Roast our Homepage

The page's copy feel like it was computer generated, supper generic, catchy in the bad way like I've seen it said the same 100 times and lacks emotional appeal

Due it would probably convert above average at least of 7/10, it's way past MVP level

I am self contrasting here, aren't I? ^^

Looks great!

A couple of thoughts:

• Instead of "Get started free", try something like "Start texting your customers"
• The hero text took a little too much work to understand. Position your customers as the hero instead of the platform. E.g. "Build relationships with your customers through text conversations."
• From a design perspective, break up the individual sections with background colors. It helps to direct the visitor's eyes.
• Put some photos of happy smiling people in your hero section. Show users what their lives will be like when they use Cartloop.

Just some quick thoughts. Take them or leave them :)

Wishing you all the best!