Roast Our Landing Page

Hi, Constantin,

Sergiu from Roast my SaaS here. Few things from me:

1. Make the headline static

Try to stick to a word, like ‘efficient’ and keep in static. For me it’s like you can’t decide what your product really does and you put more words there.

2. Be more specific with your headline

What is the problem that you solve? Because from “We become your companion for innovative way of recruiting” I don’t get anything.

Why do I need an innovative way of recruiting? What this really means? How this ‘innovative way’ helps me?

Bonus tip here: users don’t care about how innovative or high-tech is your solution. They care about their problem to be solved quickly by your product. That’s all.

3. Same thing for the next headlines

'An innovative and holistic process designed specifically for SMEs’

Again, the same thing. Words like innovative or holistic doesn’t say a thing.

I would prefer to get an exact explanation about how the process is and how is designed for SMEs - not just that is a holistic one.

4. Again for the next headline

“We revolutionize the traditional recruiting process”

“We help you take your digital ventures to the next level”

I don’t care about these things. You don’t say anything about how your product solve my problem (and you don’t even say what is the problem that you are solving).

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I know that you have some explanations about the process after that but probably you already lost me as a potential customer.

Sorry for the ‘brutal feedback’ but this is the reality from my perspective.

So I suggest to take a look again at your landing page and try to make things clearer. Start with the problem in mind and how your product helps your customers.

If you need help with this book a full roast on https://www.roastmysaas.today/ and I’ll be glad to help you (we have a little discount this month).

Wish you best of luck with your product,
Sergiu