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Email Verification For The Modern Marketing Teams
What is Email Verification?
Is it related to email authentication like on the domain DNS level (SPF, DKIM)

also, aren't we all modern marketing teams?

The average email open rate is 21.33%. Increase it by 30% with only one click.
How can it increase by 30%? Unclear

The video explained it better, but there was a whole pre-amble that I would have skipped and preferred the last 10 seconds of it.

What's the point of saying: This is not a Private Beta...

Im so confused by this and then I click the leaderboard and I see some rewards are given out for not sure what

1. Logotype need to be cleaner. The double rr at the end is hard to tell what it is.

2. 'For The Modern Marketing Teams' useless. Doesn't tell me anything.

3. 'The average email open rate is 21.33%. Increase it by 30% with only one click.' that is much better. Make that the focus.

Something like

'Increase your email open rate by 30% with one click' - that is powerful.

4. Then go straight into the specifics.

'Somor catches mis-spelt emails. No more gmail.con'
'Say goodbye to disposable emails and temp@temp.com type emails'
'Catch Catch-all emails. Don't waste time sending to marketing@bigco.com'
'Email fraud score helps protect you'

5. 'This is not a Private Beta. This is the leaderboard.' this is lame. I don't know what the leaderboard is, and don't really care. Focus on the benefit to the user.

'Invite Friends, Give your Feedback & Earn Rewards.' this is better but make it clearer.

6. "Somorr uses Fresh Techlonogy that we built ourselves from the group up, we’re proud to say that no one else on the market have the same features, such as verifying your whole list in less than 10 seconds!" > too many words, too much focus on yourself.

Change it to 'Verify your entire email list in less than 10 seconds'

Hey Daniel, I've left a detailed feedback for your website. You can check it out on this link -> https://app.ruttl.com/share/al94aNVKrJOfiUYYrvFq?page=sHU46YOJzp0ON0MYbF8S

1. There are some "trivial" design issues, see ur FAQ as an example.
2. I think you should mention ur value propositions/differentiators in a better way, not by listing all features and their description.

I think you need to restructure this whole site.
At this moment It makes no sense at all, you wont get any leads.

For example, Your messaging need to clarify who you target and what you want to sell to them. Based on that you need to develop the copywriting.

About the video, I would recommend go on Fiverr to get a Voice artist. It's not gonna cost you more than 15$, at least you it will looks professional.

I would suggest getting a pro designer who can help you with this stuff. So you can focus on the real product. Otherwise, this website won't be able to make any sell.

I wish you, good luck man. :)

I like the landing page. Your content clearly show value in what you're offering. However, there's too much white on your backgrounds which makes it seem like it has lots of blank spaces.

I would suggest adding perhaps some secondary color to the sections that have content; that way, the sections with content will not be sharing same bg color with your landing page's bg color.

I hope that makes sense and wish you all the best with this project!!