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Roast our landing page πŸ‘‡

We are a tiny team building automation tools for slack. We recently revamped our landing page. https://www.happyness.app

Please share your honest feedback.

on November 24, 2022
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    Hi Abid,

    Overall, I think it's a solid landing page. I like the confetti that draws attention when hovering over the CTA. Two things stuck out to me that may could use some fine-tuning.

    1. "CelebrationsBot" (one word) is referenced differently than the logo "celebration bot" (two words?)

    2 . I think a user testimonial would strengthen - maybe about how a team member felt when they were recognized?

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      Thanks for the feedback @Bryce_Murray. Insightful. Will keep you posted once I made tihs changes.

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    Hey Abid, Interesting!
    Found the coolest platform for celebrations! If in case you come up with adding more elements to it, keep us notified.

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      Thanks for your comment. If you are using slack at the workplace, please try our app. I can extend a 3-month free trial for you.

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    Design: the confetti in combination with dynamic text (anniversaries/birthdays) and changing mouse pointer look makes it chaotic and potentially distracts visitors from converting into consumers.

    Copy: I'd add something along the lines of "encouraging to build authentic relationships" to reassure visitors understand celebrations bot reminds you vs congratulates your colleagues on your behalf

    Hope this helps

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      Thanks for the feedback, @jansta

      Design: I will try to reduce the confetti and animation and update you.

      Copy: Very valid point. Will work on it. ✨