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Your website name "Bithub" sounds like someone misspelled "Github" and your logo looks like the Eye of Sauron. I don't exactly love either.
Visually the over the fold area looks alright. Except the texts inside your buttons are not vertically centered correctly. The texts are a pixel or two too high up.
The color selector in the Amy Alison sample landing page is very underwhelming.
The icons in your features section look visually boring because they are all the same purple color, and they don't look very high quality, either. You could just invest $1-$2 per icon and get pretty icons.
Some of your sub headlines end with a period, some don't. Choose one way and stick with it. Now it looks very amateurish. ("get instant notifications of your Landing Page performance" - no period, "track your landing page insights and forms." - period).
The footer is just very, very purple. "We provide businesses and individuals with automation tools that would assist them in securing and growing their online presence" reads awkward. I thought you wanted to help me create a landing page.
Clicking the Pricing link in your footer makes the pricing content show up to the page above, but I cannot see anything without scrolling. This is not great usability.
Clicking any of the "create free landing page" CTA buttons takes me to the login page, instead of the signup page, which is odd. And the form's main button says "submit", which should be reserved for BDSM websites.
If you don't have any content for "gallery", you could just remove that link from the main menu. Clicking something, just to see "coming soon" is very underwhelming. Even your "about" page is saying "coming soon".
An interesting idea. Needs more work.
Ok, here's my roast.
What does "unique landing page visitors mean"? Correct me if I'm wrong, are you saying that the site will stop showing after 100 unique visitors for the "early adopter" plan and 1000 visitors for the "innovator" plan? If so, I think that's a pretty bad deal for most customers. No one would want their site to shut down after a certain amount of users, so they would definitely not risk getting anything that isn't the $14.9 per month plan, so the other plans become redundant.
Also, the pricing is done weirdly, I would suggest $4.90 or $14.90. Rather than $4.9 and $14.9
I also don't see how this service differentiates itself from the other ones. I could do the same thing on wordpress for entirely free. Forms are also very easy to set up with no limits on responses on wordpress. Furthermore, there are hundreds of free SSL services out there. Analytics can be provided by google analytics.
These all take a little more time to set up, but if someone is starting a business with very little funds, taking the small bit of extra time to set up these things individually and use wordpress is worth it. Take it from someone that was in that position a few years ago.
Perhaps you offer features not seen on the homepage? Maybe it's actually easier to use or more customizable than wordpress or your analytics page is very extensive. If this is the case, then I would upload a video to the site showing how all the features work.
I would also show a demo of all what various sites look like as well as the features.
The second photo about the photographer getting instagram messages is also redundant. What is it trying to tell? It seems to me all it says is "this service will make you a website", which isn't all that useful. I would use the space that image is taking up for a video.
Btw, I would love to hear feedback on my product "Evoke" when it releases as well. So feel free to go to my bio and follow my product for updates and when it releases.