Roast our Landing page! Don't dare hold back, leave that for me to do it to my tears.

The site looks regular - which serves the purpose. but...

please rework on the illustrations (did your designer rework on top of undraw.co illustrations?) - look closely at the corners in the illustrations - finish is not there.

Also the "TMA Talent Method: Positive Psychology" illustrations doesn't match the style of rest of the illustrations.

You have some minor spelling issues: https://app.pagewatch.dev/599e4110d4a40c2e82b76daa009e26c5a2850ea7/dashboard

The site looks clean, but it is not very obvious what you are actually selling, the heading and subheading are very generic.

Hi Abdallah,

The good news is the site looks slick from the outside. Nice fresh look and feel, bold text, looks really polished.

However, I had to do a bit of digging to find out exactly what it is you're selling. The copy feels a bit heavy on the 'coorporate jargon' scale (e.g. "The TMA Method - Where competencies and talents meet", and "The TMA Method is a platform to develop individuals, teams and organizations", not really sure what any of that means), but maybe the types of customer you are targetting totally understand this angle. In any case, unless you know what the TMA method is (which I don't), the site doesn't deliver a clear description of the product early on. The 'TMA method explained' button is well placed as one of the first CTAs on the site, but taking a user to a page where the first two sections are about the company (rather than the method itself), leaves me frustrated. From my point of view I want a direct answer to my question of 'What is it', not 'who created it'. The good news is that there is a very clear explanation about 2/3s down that page (starting from the 'features' section). I would suggest leading this page with that information (and possibly moving it to the front page).

All in all, nice work, looks like a well branded landed page.