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Roast our landing page on YouTube Video AI Automation

We are build a pre-launch landing page on our product: YouTube Video AI Automation. We welcome any feedback on whether the message is clear to the audience and UI style is clean.

Landing page site: https://www.vidnova.ai/

Thanks.

on March 2, 2024
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    The hook can be better. Tell what users can achieve rather than what is the product.
    example: Generate 30 Youtube Videos in 30 Seconds by Working 3 Minutes in a Week.

    Adding blocks with user segments can also be beneficial. Like explaining benefits for creators and agencies will help you attract both audiences and make them know you understand their needs.

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      The hook sounds great. Will change.

      I like your user segments idea.

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    Hi! (WebDesigner / SEO
    (I summarize..)

    Hero section

    • You need to modify your hook in hero section. (something more strong, and that connects with your 1st target)
    • The subtitle could be a little be greater for PCs, it's too small.
      (you use 15px, you can test around 20px - its X3 less the title)

    In Benefits block:

    • purple and blue frames aren't centered, and rounded edges not display correctly on PC.
    • You use multiple buttons "join the waitlist", not necessary (one for all)

    How it work block:

    • Use subtile in white (not in grey), like in hero section.
    • Titles (1,2,3) in white for all, help for better visibility.

    Why don't you integrate the workflow inside the landing page (not in FAQ), its essential part of your job / service / app. People need to know how its work!

    Could you use a video in the hero, a sort of big Gif about your software?

    After if you need more help, DM me (I just created my page :-D )

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    designer here :))

    • double check your website on a larger screen. a lot of text makes you squint cos it's too small. body text as a very very general thumb should be 16px for body text on desktop, and 14px on mobile. adjust accordingly depending on whatever font/typeface you choose. yours is currently on 8px
    • header isn't clear - and you're outlining what your business is, rather than explicitly writing out how it'll impact/benefit your users. make it about your users, not what you do
    • the accompanying image on the landing page doesn't tell me anything. the prompt is hard to read because the colour of the text against the background doesn't have enough contrast. my eye is draw to the orange bit in the picture which tells me nothing about what you guys do
    • general aesthetic is kind of bland
    • there's no need to put 'join the waitlist' after every single benefit - that section is used to communicate benefit. the darkness of the black pulls peoples' eyes away from the actual benefit. you can put it as a larger button below the benefits section instead if you're trying to convert right after
    • get rid of the 'time efficiency' and 'cost efficiency' white square boxes - don't double up text and imagery otherwise there's too much all at once. make the subheaders of each benefit larger if you're worried people can't see it
    • how it works section: my eyes only drawn to step (2), but i'd assume everything about 'how it works' is important
    • general copy around the page doesn't flow well and .. doesn't really add value to the user? e.g. 'video creation without surprise in one tool'. i dont think video creation is ever 'surprising' traditionally. i know what you're trying to communicate (that users will get what they expected with the AI tool, but its just framed weirdly)

    if you have any other q's feel free to contact me on @angehyc on twitter - happy designing!

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    Looks good!

    One thing I noticed: The "Edit generated text as needed and..." is not clear to me what is for, and may distract a little, and its repeated several times. At least that how I felt it, that attention could be used for something better

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      Cool. We will change the repeated phrases.

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    The texts on the page could use help, it's not very good English wise, the top is very dense, there are many small mistakes and some texts just aren't cohesive

    I'm not sure the page communicates what I get as a user, what the process is and how it works

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      Thanks for the great feedback from the user perspective. Appreciate it.