We are looking to re-do our landing page (https://www.requestly.in/) to better target our users, would love to hear your thoughts on the following:
Feel free to answer a subset of questions and / or provide some general feedback as well. Any feedback, minor or major, is appreciated! 🙌
#landing-page-feedback #ask-ih
Hey there! I'm a developer, so hope this is useful:
Above the fold:
"Supercharge Your Web Development" is a bit generic. Something like "Request Modifier for your Browser" might be better.
Also, Use Cases would be great!
Lastly, screenshots would help me envision what using the tool is like.
Good luck with your redesign!
Best,
Will
Thanks, @devhoag. This is certainly helpful. We'd also love to know if you have any specific tools/products in mind to create good landing pages?
hey, just some minor stuff on the design part...
your favicon is getting lost due to low contrast between the yellow arrows and transparent background, consider using a solid blue background instead, it will pop up a lot
then on the "more features section"
the headers of each feature are in a different color/font, this looks a bit odd, coherency is very important if the rest of the page is using another font/color stick to it.
if you want to make more emphasis on those headers you can always do it in other ways, like incorporating icons, or using a different font weight, but not a totally different font.
and what they have said below, about the copy is very important.
good luck man, keep it up!
Here are some questions that I thought to myself while going through. Maybe they are caused by my own ignorance, but hopefully it's useful to you regardless. My intention is to be honest & helpful here, not mean in any way.
I would suggest focusing on simplifying your copy. Checkout this Stripe Atlas guide on writing effective landing page copy (https://stripe.com/atlas/guides/landing-page-copy). I hope that this helps you! Feel free to message me if you want another perspective after you make changes.
Thanks, @johnlukeg - Your comment has been immensely helpful. Thank you so much for taking the time to go through this. Basically, Requestly is a dev tool to modify network requests - i.e. modify headers, query parameters, set up redirects, etc. Let me give you a common example.
Redirect Production JS to LocalHost JS
Often in a production environment, we have minified and compressed javascript and if you find an issue in your prod env, debugging becomes hell difficult so you can set up a redirect rule in Requestly to redirect say www.example.com/blah/blah/main.js to localhost:8080/foo/foo/main.js and now you can easily put breakpoints in your localhost JS, debug the issue, fix the issue, test the issue and deploy the new version.
Otherwise, the above-said process would have been painful. This is just one use case solved by Requestly's redirect capability. There are numerous such examples which can be solved like this.
I gave you the context because, after the redesign, you can better judge whether the new landing page makes sense or not.
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