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Roast sprints .so

by KATT

All right bring it on.

How can I make the landing page of our accountability challenge sprints.so better?

Be honest, I promise you won't break my heart.

KATT's avatarKATT
on October 5, 2023
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    Great work, some notes:

    1. When I first loaded the page, I saw the text under "We know it's hard" for a brief second and only then the hero. For me, It was an unpleasant flash effect that I presume happen when someone first loads the page. It could be mended maybe by adding a skeleton for the hero section?
    2. The quotes (for example by James Clear) should not include a blank space between the text and the quotation marks, IMHO.
    3. I don't see images under the "We got your back" section
    4. Clicking on the "join" CTA scrolls a lot of the page very quickly - not sure I'm a fan of that effect.
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      I noticed these too, Eyal.

      KATT, here are some more notes on the copy:

      • The headline seems okay.

      • The supporting headline doesn't seem to drive home any point. It's just a description. If the purpose of the landing page is to convert visitors, then the supporting headline could be better.

      • The first CTA is clear and entices the reader to click 'cause I mean, who doesn't want to make progress?🤷🏿‍♀️

      • For the 'We got your back' section, the steps aren't telling your readers how exactly you are using sprints.so to help them. How does the community work? How do the members of the community help each other to smash goals?

      Instead of using abstract concepts like 'laser focus' and 'positive pressure', be practical and use abstract concepts for benefits.

      For example...
      1- set monthly goals. Get clear and stay focused;
      2- Monthly check-ins and messages. There's no room for excuses or procrastination. Embrace the positive pressure from your accountability partners.

      • The client testimonials are on point.👍🏾

      • Grammatical errors:

        1. FAQs, not FAQ
        2. In Justin Welsh's quote, shouldn't it be '...people who took small steps consistently over a very long period of time?'

      Ohh, images or scribbles would be nice to have just for the UX.

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